Talk:Dejaría Todo/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 11:09, 9 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox

• Needs alt → it needs to be different should be something like "An image of Chayanne looking...with a red background"

 Done

Lead

• from the album in September 1998. → from the album in September 1998 by Sony Discos.
• A rock ballad, it tells of everything the singer is capable of doing for his lover. → The rock ballad details everything the singer is capable of doing for his lover.
• The awards come after the chart performance
• Commercially, it topped the charts in Costa Rica, El Salvador, Honduras, and the Billboard Hot Latin Songs and Latin Pop Airplay charts in the United States. → Commercially, it topped the Billboard Hot Latin Songs and Latin Pop Airplay charts in the United States. (see below the reason)
• by Brazilian Leonardo → singer, rapper, singer-songwriter, actor?
• US → United States (first instance)
• CNCO's rendition was one of songs they sung on their covers album, Déjà Vu (2021) and ranked at number on the Peruvian pop charts according to Monitor Latino. → CNCO's rendition was included on their covers album, Déjà Vu (2021). It peaked at number four on the Peruvian pop charts according to Monitor Latino.

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Background and composition

• (Atado a Tu Amor) and release date → why is the album name between brackets? release date which was?
• composed for Atado a Tu Amor was "Dejaría Todo", which also he produce → composed it usually includes the production and the writing. Are you trying to say he wrote this?
• A rock romantic ballad,[6] it talks about everything the singer is capable of doing for his loved one.[7] → "Dejaría Todo" is a rock romantic ballad, that, lyrically, addresses everything the singer is capable of doing for his loved one.[6][7]
• Chayanne regarded the track as one of his favorites → when did he state this?
• The artist also revealed in 2021 → In 2021, the artist revealed

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Promotion and reception

• on the first week of September 1998 → on the first week of September 1998 by Sony Discos + source backing the label
• A live version of the track was included on the albums Vivo (2008) and A Solas Con Chayanne (2012),[15][16] while the original recording was featured on his greatest hits album Grandes Éxitos (2002) → The original recording was also featured on his greatest hits album Grandes Éxitos (2002). A live version of the track was included on the albums Vivo (2008) and A Solas Con Chayanne (2012).[15][16]
• A music video for the track was filmed which a writer for Los 40 described → A music video for the track was filmed. A writer for Los 40 described it (last sentence of the first paragraph)
• First the charts, then the awards.
• which was awarded to Ricky Martin's "La Copa de la Vida" → remove as the source doesn't work
• At the inaugural Ritmo Latino Music Awards in the same year → In the same year, at the inaugural Ritmo Latino Music Awards,
• "Esperanza" → year of release between brackets, both sources at the end of the sentence
• All those charts are Notimex, please see below
• Latin Pop Airplay charts in the US → Latin Pop Airplay charts in the United States

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Cover versions

• Its music video features the artist singing under a waterfall with his lover. → remove, doesn't add much to the article, if had something to do with the original version
• with his son Zé Felipe → is he also a singer?
• and peaked → It peaked
• A music video for their cover was released to coincide with the album's launch date and features the group performing the track on stage → same as previous

 Done

Weekly charts

• Not sure about these Notimex charts. I can't find any information regarding them and they are not listed under Wikipedia:Record charts or even mentioned on its talk page.
• You need to add Leonardo, CNCO's and Johnny Ray's version here as well

 Done

Year-end charts

• Fine

Formats and track listings

• Move this below the cover versions
• Use spaced n dash

 Done

See also

• Fine

References

• Reference 26 archive doesn't work. Remove it
• Source check on 2, 23-26 and 28-35
• Source numbers 5, 8, 19, 33 and 38 remove publisher
• Source 15 and 17 is publisher, not work
• Source 24 remove work
• Source 44 has two publishers?
• Multiple instances wiki linking AllMusic and Billboard, only wikilink first appearance
• Multiple wikilinks of Proquest
• Source 21 remove publisher

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Overall

• Needs to mention the label the single was released under in the body of the article.
• Seven days. Let me know once you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:30, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

  @MarioSoulTruthFan Thanks again for the review. I have ADHD, so I tend to overlook the simplest of mistakes. Anyways, I had trouble finding a complete booklet online, so the personnel section is limited again. =\ Let me know if there's else I might've missed. Erick (talk) 20:32, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

  Only two? Nuke the personnel section then, just be sure to mention them in the body of the article. I forgot something btw. I marked things with  Not done for you two to address, new issues, and some old ones. I also made some changes to the article, let me know if you are ok with those. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:46, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

  @MarioSoulTruthFan Alright, cool! Did it! Except removing the wikilinks to ProQuest, it's part of the {{ProQuest}} template and can't be removed. Suggestions? Erick (talk) 19:26, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

  I meant the "via Proquest" bit, not the template. Good job, only missed one thing and let me know if you are with the changes I made to the article in between. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:18, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

  Got it! And I'm okay with the changes! Erick (talk) 20:23, 19 June 2022 (UTC)