Talk:Desde un Principio: From the Beginning/GA1

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 20:40, 30 September 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing my FLC for Selena, in return I will review this article. Best, Jona^{talk to me} 20:40, 30 September 2012 (UTC)

1 disambig

Fixed.

Infobox

• The "length" section needs a {{duration}} template

 Done

Lead

• You know Billboard needs to be in italics ;)

 Done I didn't know that it also applies to the music awards as well.

• Numbers needs to comply with WP:ORDINAL

 Done

• "and was named the best-selling album of 2000 on both." --> "and became the best-selling album of 2000 on both charts."

 Done

• Too many sentences start with "It"

 Doneish. I used some variations, but I think I might need help on this one.

• The RIAA needs to be spelled out completely

 Done

Content

• Overlinking found (Contra la Corriente)

 Done Removed second instance.

• ""No Me Ames" (Track 1) is a duet with Jennifer Lopez - Lopez included it her debut album On The 6)." ---> "The opener, a tropical version of "No Me Ames", is a duet with American singer and actress Jennifer Lopez; she included the recording on her debut album On The 6 (1999)". Remember not to overuse parenthesis as it overthrows the flow of text.

 Done

• ""Vivir lo Nuestro" is also a duet (featuring La India) that was originally recorded on the RMM Records compilation album Combinacion Perfecta." ---> ""Vivir lo Nuestro", featuring La India, was originally recorded on the RMM Records compilation album Combinacion Perfecta".

 Done

Commercial reception

• Numbers does not follow WP:ORDINAL

 Done

• The second sentence could be combined with the first one

 Done

• "On the Billboard Tropical Albums chart, the album debuted at #1 the week of 27 November 1999, and remained at #1 for five months" ---> "The album debuted atop the Billboard Tropical Albums chart on the week of 27 November 1999, and remained at number one for five consecutive months."

 Done

• Inconsistency with dates (MMMM-DD-YYYY and DD-MMMM-YYYY)

 Done

• "On the Billboard 200, the album peaked at #151. According to Billboard, this compilation was the best-selling album of 2000 on the Latin Albums and Tropical Albums charts in the United States" ----> "Desde un Principio: From the Beginning peaked at number 151 on the Billboard 200 chart and became the best-selling album of 2000 for the Top Latin Albums and Tropical Albums charts."

 Done

• I believe it would be best to add what is a gold certification.
  • I added an internal link in "certified gold" to Music recording sales certification. Is that alright?

Critical reception

• "Promise" remove the "e" ;)

 Done I "promise".

• Billboard is a printed source, needs italicizing pronto .

 Done

Tracklisting

• Ref needed (Allmusic)

 Done

References

• FN#1 publisher?

 Done

• FN#3, FN#4, FN#5, FN#6, FN#7, FN#8, FN#16 Allmusic is a website, link Allmusic and Rovi Corporation in FN#3

 Done

• FN#9 wikilink Amazon.com

 Done

• FN#10 wikilink Billboard

 Done

• Inconsistency with publisher(s) of Billboard magazine (Nielsen Business Media, Inc vs. Nieslon Company vs. Prometheus Global Media)

 Done

Putting the article  On hold until these issues have been dealt with. Best, Jona^{talk to me} 21:13, 30 September 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! Erick (talk) 03:54, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

You're welcome =) I had fixed some minor things on the article and it is now ready for GA status. Great work! Jona^{talk to me} 14:01, 1 October 2012 (UTC)