Talk:Detroit-style pizza/Archive 4

Latest comment: 4 years ago by The Squirrel Conspiracy in topic Did you know nomination
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Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk06:46, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

 
Detroit-style pizza in a traditional-style pan

Created by Valereee (talk). Self-nominated at 13:12, 30 April 2020 (UTC).

  •   Awesome article. Stand with all criteria (most of it already dealt with in the GAR). The hook is interesting but I think we need more clarification on the source, which states that the bakery used pans "often used as drip trays". Maybe change the hook to something like "baked in the same type of pans use as automotive drip trays".--Bolter21 (talk to me) 11:36, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
Hey, Bolter21, thanks for starting review! How about

ALT1: ... that Detroit-style pizza (pictured) traditionally is baked in pans used as automotive drip trays? —valereee (talk) 11:44, 4 May 2020 (UTC)

  Better as it is much more percise.--Bolter21 (talk to me) 11:48, 4 May 2020 (UTC)