Talk:Devil Survivor 2: The Animation/GA1
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Tintor2 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 14:25, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
The article looks to be in good shape but there are some issues that should be touched before passing it:
- The references has inconsistent linking. Pony Canyon is not linked while the rest of the publishers are linked.
- Alternatively, the Square Enix site could be used to source the book materials.
- If possible (though not necessary for a GA), the reception section could be expanded. Check [1], or [2].
Anyway, Good work in the article.Tintor2 (talk) 14:25, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
- I need to rewrite a few things as well. Anyway thanks for taking up the review and sorry about the wait. —KirtZMessage 15:55, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
- Done. I didnt add the Fandom Post review since they have individual episode reviews and I'll try to merge most of their main points into a single paragraph at a later date. I also took some of Lucia's suggestions from here. I think it should be fine now. —KirtZMessage 17:40, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
- Great work.Tintor2 (talk) 01:41, 23 July 2014 (UTC)