Talk:Dexter (Dexter episode)/GA1

GA Review

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Plot:

• "Debra cries that she is at a crime scene, and wants him to be with her." Are you sure about this? I don't remember this being the case. Maybe you could reword this to be a bit more clear?
  • Well, I reworded it a bit, but that was the case.--Music26/11 13:06, 20 February 2009 (UTC)

Production:

• "As promotion for the show, Showtime posted exclusive material of the pilot on their website." can you include what kind of material?
  • It's a bit hard to say, is it better now?--Music26/11 13:06, 20 February 2009 (UTC)

Casting:

• "To prepare for the part, Hall interviewed serial killers and read books on the pschycology of serial killers." Unless I'm missing something somewhere, the source doesn't say Hall personally interviewed serial killers, just that he read about serial killers. Please fix this.
  • Fixed, sorry, I overread the part that he read interviews with serial killers.--Music26/11 13:06, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
• "He also interviewed the head blood-spatter analyst at the Miami police department." He didn't just interview him, he spent time with him at the precinct. Can you revise the sentence to reflect this?
  • Reworded.--Music26/11 13:06, 20 February 2009 (UTC)

Good stuff. --Hunter Kahn (talk) 06:17, 20 February 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, ps. if you are interested in Dexter, you can sign the taskforce proposal.

GA Review: Pass

1. Well-written: Prose good, MOS good.
2. Factually accurate and verifiable: Sources good, no original research.
3. Broad in its coverage: Addresses main aspects, no unneeded detail.
4. Neutral: Yes.
5. Stable: Yes.
6. Images: Yes.

--Hunter Kahn (talk) 18:16, 20 February 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the quick reply, and thanks for passing the article.--Music26/11 20:58, 20 February 2009 (UTC)