Talk:Diane Guerrero/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:19, 6 June 2015 (UTC)Reply


I'll have this to you by tomorrow JAGUAR  22:19, 6 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

Initial comments

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On hold

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There are some prose issues and unencyclopaedic content that prevent this from meeting the GA criteria at this time but I'll put this on hold for the standard seven days until all of the above can be addressed. The most important issue is the length of the lead, and if possible, an expansion on some parts of the article would be great. The references all appear to be fine. Thanks!   JAGUAR  19:34, 8 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

Close - promoted

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Thanks for that. I think that because this is a short and compact article the lead already summarises the two sections despite being short. Other than the the article is well researched and the references are reliable. Well done!   JAGUAR  16:15, 10 June 2015 (UTC)Reply