Talk:Did It Again (Shakira song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 19:08, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for taking up the review! --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 02:47, 27 June 2013 (UTC)

General

One dead link

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Info box

• Why is recorded 2008 and 2009?

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

• This is an English language single, so Dexter doesn't need to be here.

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

• As it is a dance song with elements of electropop and samba, electropop and samba should be removed.

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Lead

• is a song by recorded by → Spot the mistake

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

• Is Shakira credited in the booklet as a co-producer? As The Neptune's rarely allow co-production.

I don't have the booklet, but many sites state Shakira as the producer of the song too. Shakira wrote and co-produced all the tracks on the album. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Okay.  — AARON • ^TALK

• Use a different word than "lauded"

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

• Put US before Billboard

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

• Should write 'chart' after the name of the chart

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Background and composition

• from the album She Wolf → Comma after album

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

• contains strong elements → Remove 'strong', it's superfluous in this context

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Critical reception

• received very → Remove 'very', sounds bias

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Music video

• I don't see the point of the one sentence block quote, just keep it as part of the prose.

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

• This section could simply be two paragraphs.

I made the section into three paras- Development, synopsis, and reception. Is that okay? Or shall I merge development and synopsis?--WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Yep  — AARON • ^TALK

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:50, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Live performances

• She definitely performed this song on The X Factor in the UK.

 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Charts

• How come US Tropical isn't in the table if it peaked at 11?

It is there. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Okay. The Latin Airplay bit threw me.  — AARON • ^TALK

• 2009 peaks should be in a separate table to 2010 peaks.

 Done They were all 2009 peaks, I don't know why there was 10 there... --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

References

• MTV, Digital Spy, Allmusic, BBC, UK Singles Chart, iTunes etc. should not be italics.

Ugh, I did this all in the beginning and some users used AWB and removed all the apostrophes. Well I'll do it again.

They should never be in italics, they aren't newspaper/printed applications. Whoever told you to make them italics was wrong.  — AARON • ^TALK

No I used the apostrophes to just cancel out the auto italicization of these entries. Anyways : Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 12:50, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

• It's Official Singles Chart, no 'The'

 Done

Status

On hold  — AARON • ^TALK 20:39, 14 July 2013 (UTC)

Passing.  — AARON • ^TALK 12:58, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

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