Talk:Dincolo de nori/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Cartoon network freak in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Magiciandude (talk · contribs) 16:35, 14 August 2018 (UTC)
Doing... Going to review this very interesting article. I'll probably start either tomorrow or Friday. Erick (talk) 16:35, 14 August 2018 (UTC)
- Lead
- "Clouds" should be capitalized as it's being translated to English.
- Remove the comma after Craiova
- I would change "containing" to "featuring".
- I wouldn't mention how it did commercially since it's not mention on the body of the article and that statement itself would need to be backed up by a source.
- Background and release
- Missing word "a" after "including".
- I think just "hired" is fine instead "further hired".
- At Eurovision
- "and consisted of the final on 30 April 1994" I would change to "and the finals were held on 30 April 1994"
- "Romania came in 21st position with 14 points" Out of how many positions? The 1994 ESC article mentions there were 25 countries in the finals. Erick (talk) 03:17, 23 August 2018 (UTC)
- Misc
- I did a quick search on Billboard and found it won Song of the Year from a Romanian magazine. Just thought you might be interested. Source
That's all I've got. Just fix these issues and it's good to go. If you'd like, would you be interested in reviewing Amor (Cristian Castro song)? Erick (talk) 02:15, 23 August 2018 (UTC)
- @Magiciandude: Hi there and thank you for your review! I believe I've adressed all your points. Also, thanks for the Billboard source; I didn't think it would write about such a topic, so it didn't come to my mind to search there...
Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:07, 23 August 2018 (UTC) - Yeah, Billboard is surprisingly good with international music. I fixed the ref for Billboard, so it's all good to go! I now pass this article. Erick (talk) 13:54, 23 August 2018 (UTC)
- @Magiciandude: Thank you very much! I also have two Good topic candidates, Alexandra Stan studio albums (1st supplementary nomination) and Natalia Kills albums. Maybe you can give a support or oppose? Thanks! Cartoon network freak (talk) 14:49, 23 August 2018 (UTC)
