Talk:DisneySea (California)
Latest comment: 2 years ago by DoorKnobbles in topic Edits made to improve the issue of the article
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Edits made to improve the issue of the article
editI deleted some wordings in "Interactive Programs for Students of all Ages" to make it not written like an advertisement. I also made some changes in "Oceana" as it includes too many quotations. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Winyuen75 (talk • contribs) 05:56, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
- I made further improvements on this effort by adding more detail into the lead to give a more well rounded background to DisneySea which mentions its cancellation and also adding another section which goes into brief detail of why DisneySea/Disney Port was cancelled so the whole article doesn't sound like a brochure for DisneySea. DoorKnobbles (talk) 11:13, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
Deleted section "Other Educational Activities"
editThis section was deleted as it was an overly long quotation. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Livitanev (talk • contribs) 06:08, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
Change of language in "Oceana"
editThis section was reworded as the language used was not entirely appropriate for a Wikipedia article and was written similar to an advertisement. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Livitanev (talk • contribs) 06:09, 24 March 2022 (UTC)