Talk:Distant Lights (song)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:59, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Review for this is coming soon. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:59, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• flawless

Background

• completing eighty-percent -> completing the most
• For the quote in the second paragraph transform it to "his" using [his], etc...
• concluding, "I need escape." -> concluding that "[he needs] escape

Composition and release

• manages to -> managing to
• melody", that -> melody" that
• via the iTunes Store -> through iTunes Store
• iTunes Store; the track -> iTunes Store, with it coming
• 2005's -> 2005 recording
• Douze dub -> Douze dub version
• single," -> single",

• This is actually correct since she continues her thoughts

• stating -> stating that
• that is foreign to Ivy's catalog -> as being foreign to Ivy's catalog

Track listing and formats

• United States digital download -> American digital download
• United States & France Remix EP -> American/French remix EP

Release history

• Unlink formats

• Outcome: Almost flawless article. On hold for 7 days. Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 15:53, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

• @Cartoon network freak: Finished it up! Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 21:27, 14 June 2016 (UTC).

• Passing article! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 00:14, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

• @Cartoon network freak: WHOOPS! I forgot to do that one suggestion! Thanks for taking care of it!!! Carbrera (talk) 00:16, 15 June 2016 (UTC).

• @Carbrera: No problem! Cartoon network freak (talk) 00:17, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.