Talk:Dizzy (Olly Alexander song)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Nascar9919 (talk · contribs) 00:37, 16 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: TheNuggeteer (talk · contribs) 14:13, 14 August 2024 (UTC)

Reviewing this article like I did in Europapa, thanks! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 14:13, 14 August 2024 (UTC)

@TheNuggeteer: Pinging as a checkup. It's been over a week since any progress has been made. Are you still able to do this review? Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 02:56, 24 August 2024 (UTC)

Going to review the article. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 11:36, 26 August 2024 (UTC)

Everything okay! Going to initiate the second wave. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:13, 28 August 2024 (UTC)

First wave

Lead

Nothing wrong with the lead, good job! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:05, 26 August 2024 (UTC)

Background and composition

• It seems like there are a lot of things in source 10 to add to the article. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:05, 26 August 2024 (UTC)

• Added some things. Let me know if you want anything else.

Music video and promotion

• You could also add source 14 for "Graham Meets Olly".

•  Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 23:54, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

• Source 18 does not mention the deconstructed house and the rooftop.

• Fixed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 23:54, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

• I suggest you add Release to the section and also make Promotion its own section. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:05, 26 August 2024 (UTC)

•  Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 23:54, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

Second wave

Critical reception

• There are multiple reviews in source 32, you can include them.

• Not done. Already included with their separate sources. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

• Why is source 4 put as "subscription needed" when it's easily accessible?

• Removed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

• You could also add a tune that doesn’t so much spin you right round as sit you down and bore you to tears from source 31. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:40, 28 August 2024 (UTC)

Eurovision Song Contest (up to At Eurovision, 1st paragraph)

• Source 41 also mentions the people who led the search, you can add it.

•  Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

• The source does not mention that the series was the 21st.

• Removed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

• You can add the contents of the letter in source 45. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:40, 28 August 2024 (UTC)

•  Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

  Everything looks good, will review the rest (Third wave) later. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:41, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

Third wave

At Eurovision (rest)

• There's more information about the staging in source 51, you can include that. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

• Not particularly sure what you want me to add? It seems like it's detailed enough already; I could be wrong, though. What would you honestly want added?

Credits and personnel

Everything's okay here. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

Track listing

• Can't see a source for the length of the extended version and the spinner. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

• Extended version shows up on my end. As for the spinner, removed. Nothing seems to show the times for the spinner. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 16:28, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

Charts and release history

Going to assume they're okay. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

Other comments

Something's wrong with ref 5. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

• Fixed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 16:28, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

  @TheNuggeteer: Done with my edits. Look good to you? Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 16:54, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

  Everything's done, passing the article. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:13, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

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