Talk:Doctor Who series 11/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Alex 21 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:34, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:34, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Infobox looks good.
- Lead is also in great shape.
Episodes
edit- "on board" → "onboard"
- "The Woman Who Fell to Earth" is 223 words, so try shortening it per MOS:TVPLOT.
- Done episode 1 now 191 words. Chompy Ace 22:04, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- "the group locate" → "the group locates"
- "the group learn" → "the group learns"
- "offspring to" → "offspring of"
- Add a comma after "Graham, Yasmin".
- "space-station" → "space station"
- Add a comma after "removes it".
- "group arrive" → "group arrives"
- "staff have" → "staff has"
- Add a comma after "Yasmin, Ryan".
- "The Witchfinders" is 210 words, so try shortening it per MOS:TVPLOT.
- Done episode 8 now 187 words. Chompy Ace 22:18, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- "during 1612" → "in 1612"
- "Afterwards" → "Afterward"
Casting
edit- Remove the comma after "later in 2017".
- "Matt Lucas or Pearl Mackie" → "Matt Lucas nor Pearl Mackie"
- Add a comma after "Ryan Sinclair".
- Everything else is really well-sourced.
- Already done Chompy Ace 04:23, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
Production
edit- Improve the non-free rationales for both images with this template.
- Not done images have been removed due to the template says
No purpose specified. Please edit this image description and provide a purpose.
; both images placed in prose rather than infobox. Chompy Ace 21:36, 11 March 2021 (UTC)- I've restored the images with the linked template and a specified purpose; images are not required to be in the infobox to have a purpose. Cheers. -- /Alex/21 03:58, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
- Not done images have been removed due to the template says
- Feels weird to have both #Music and #Soundtrack sections. Could they be merged?
- Done merged Chompy Ace 04:33, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
Release
edit- "web site" → "website"
- Add commas after "Cole, Chibnall", "Kazakhstani", and "Cole, Walsh".
- Remove the commas after "October 2018" and "Sundays was a first in the programme's history".
Reception
edit- This section looks good.
Soundtrack
edit- This section also looks good so a merge with #Music doesn't seem too complicated.
- Done moved to #Music Chompy Ace 04:33, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- I hope you don't mind, but I've re-separated this section back out for conformity with the past ten series articles (or twelve, given the specials), which all have their own separate Soundtrack sections at the end of the article. -- /Alex/21 08:57, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
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