Talk:Don't Break My Heart (Nicola song)

Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
Good articleDon't Break My Heart (Nicola song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
February 10, 2018Good article nomineeListed
August 7, 2019Good topic candidatePromoted
October 28, 2022Good topic removal candidateDemoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:15, 10 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 13:15, 10 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • Wikilink Cat Music in the lead and the infobox

Background and release

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  • "Prior to representing her country at Eurovision, Nicola has taken part in the national selection five times beginning with 1992." - Nicola had taken part in the national selection five times with her first appearance coming in 1992.
  • "and was later included on Nicola's greatest hits album Best of Nicola (2003) and fourth studio album De mă vei chema (2004)" - and her fourth studio album (2004)
  • Wikilink Cat Music

At Eurovision

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  • Include the date when the Selecția Națională was held
  • "Romania automatically qualified to the final due to the top 19 result last year" - the previous year
  • "where Nicola performed in 24th place, " - the wording before this piece of text makes it sound like that Nicola performed in 24th place in the Eurovision Song Contest 2002
  • "the singer wore a red jacket along with red pants," - trousers as Eurovision related issues are written in BrEng
  • "Gehring from Prinz.de criticized" - criticised for the same reason as above

Release history

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  • Add scope="col" to the columns per MOS:DTT

Overall a nice little piece of work you've done. Placing it on hold for the time being to allow you to respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 18:43, 10 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: Hi! Thank you very much for your review; I've implemented your queries above. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:07, 10 February 2018 (UTC)Reply
@Cartoon network freak: Nice timely response :) Can now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:18, 10 February 2018 (UTC)Reply