Talk:Don't Touch That Dial/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Adamstom.97 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Wikipedia:Short description: All mainspace articles should have a short description.
  • Plot section is less than 400 words so it passes MOS:TVPLOT.
  • "... sees a colorful toy helicopter" – it should be established that the world is in black-and-white
  • Remove the commas after "outside the house", "bleeds in color", and "Vision in the series".
  • "he used lighting to try create" → "he used lighting to try to create"
  • "for Olsen to try mimic" → "for Olsen to try to mimic"
  • Add a comma after "but because of COVID-19 restrictions".
  • "Nielsen Media Research, who measure" → "Nielsen Media Research, which measures" (company)
  • Add hyphens between "most watched", "most streamed", and "most viewed".
  • "the top 0.2% or series" – typo?
  • "had 9.3% share" → "had a 9.3% share"
  • Be consistent with Comicbook.com or ComicBook.com.
  • "Shannon Miller, Liz" → "Miller, Liz Shannon" (#37)
  • Citation #49 is missing an author credit ("Seymour, Mike").
  • Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:33, 2 September 2021 (UTC)Reply
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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed