Talk:Don Eddy (baseball)
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Sanfranciscogiants17 in topic GA Review
Don Eddy (baseball) has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: September 30, 2021. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:15, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
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- Just to avoid short sentences, perhaps "He batted right-handed but threw left-handed. Eddy was a native of Swaledale, Iowa." > "A native of Swaledale, Iowa, he batted right-handed but threw left-handed."?
- "the depth chart" what's one of those?
- " as a pitcher in 1966" overlinked.
- "Duluth–Superior Dukes " en-dash.
- "a 7-5 loss" likewise.
- "pitcher in short relief" what does that mean?
- People wondering that can click on the relief pitcher article. It's a quote, so I can't change what was said. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 02:27, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
- "on developing a curveball.[3]" overlinked.
- "holes in one" hyphenate?
- "in Rockwell, Iowa, from" overlinked.
That's it for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:43, 27 September 2021 (UTC)