Talk:Donald Trump/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 04:34, 18 September 2016 (UTC)

Auto-fail: This article is not at all stable and quite clearly won't be for a politician running for office as details are highly subject to change as the election gets closer, particularly for one as controversial as Trump. Please wait at the very least until the 2016 election has passed before renominating. From a glance, I see that many paragraphs are ridiculously short (some of which have only one or two sentences/lines) and should be expanded or merged with other text for better flow. See WP:Manual of Style/Layout#Paragraphs for more. Please also provide a citation for "Favorable reviews of the building's design helped convince the city to approve the project. Trump hired Barbara Res to manage the building's construction, and she became the first woman to manage the construction of a skyscraper in New York City". His filmography table shouldn't have rowspans as it hinders accessibility. "Family" doesn't need pictures of his wife or children as it just clutters the section, and they already have their own articles anyway which is where they really belong. Detail on his grandchildren is also probably better for his children's articles. The "Other personal information" section should be removed entirely; it is already noted that he doesn't drink earlier in the article, rumors have no place in a BLP (particularly for personal claims), and the rest isn't really significant (unless the "hints" mentioned of being involved with married women led to him separating from a partner of his own). Sorry, but this is far from ready to be a GA. Snuggums (talk / edits) 04:34, 18 September 2016 (UTC)