Talk:Dormir Contigo/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:56, 23 June 2017 (UTC)

Initial comments

• I don't think you need to link "song" in the first sentence of the lead; it's a pretty basic term
• I think you could be more descriptive for the alt description; typically it describes the cover image itself
• Change the genre in the infobox to just "pop" since "ballad" is not a genre
• Make sure you mention the "pop ballad" in the lead and article text as well
• "the first leg of the Amarte Es Un Placer Tour in 1999." --> "the first leg of his Amarte Es Un Placer Tour in 1999." (I think it would be important to mention that it's his tour)
• "It was released as the third single from Amarte Es un Placer on January 2000. " --> Reference needed
• "Richard Torres for Newsday citing the ballad as one of the best tracks on the record." --> "Richard Torres for Newsday cited the ballad as one of the best tracks on the record."
• Reference #3 – link Billboard
• Reference #10 – link Warner Music Group

ON HOLD – ping me with any questions. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 01:56, 23 June 2017 (UTC).

I'll get to work on this sometime later this week after I finish up a GA review. Erick (talk) 22:10, 25 June 2017 (UTC)

There, it's all done. Thanks again as always for the review! Erick (talk) 02:15, 29 June 2017 (UTC)