Talk:Dorothy Gordon (Australian actress)

Latest comment: 19 days ago by 2403:5807:1A18:0:51A2:51E8:9010:61C2 in topic Review Request

Review Request

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Hi there! I'm a student new to Wikipedia and I am contributing to the Dorothy Gordon (Australian actress) page as part of my course. I have made significant changes and will be editing the page over the next few weeks, and would really appreciate any feedback and/or advice to improve the article! Jolisjoujou (talk) 11:41, 17 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

It was a copyvio Victuallers (talk) 10:31, 4 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

‘She had more teaching’ better as ‘pursued further study’. ‘self-indulgent’ rather than ‘indulgent’. The damage to her vocal chords appears to have been a consequence of her imprisonment, as it’s written here. How? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2403:5807:1A18:0:51A2:51E8:9010:61C2 (talk) 20:09, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply