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Reviewer: SilkTork *YES! 17:46, 14 December 2010 (UTC)

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Interesting topic, and a detailed looking article. I'm a little daunted that all the sources are print, as that will delay checking references; but it's possible that some of the texts will either be available in my local library or will be digitised on Google Books. I'll read the article over the next few days and then start to leave comments. SilkTork *YES! 17:46, 14 December 2010 (UTC)

I've never had a reviewer say that before! If you cannot get hold of the books to check, what will happen then? Dapi89 (talk) 10:49, 15 December 2010 (UTC)
Hi, sorry to jump in. If I might offer a suggestion, Google Books might have snippet views. However, I believe that generally at GAN print sources can be accepted on good faith if a reviewer is unable to view them themselves. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 11:57, 15 December 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for clarifying. Dapi89 (talk) 13:32, 15 December 2010 (UTC)

I never accept in good faith, I always check. I wouldn't feel comfortable passing the contents of an article without doing at least a minimal check that what it says is reasonably true and accurate. That doesn't mean I check each and every source, but I do some background reading and research. I use what I discover to see if the article covers the main points, and hasn't left out negative or significant alternative views. Then I will check random cites in the article to ensure what is said in the article is what is said in the source. If the cites I randomly check are fine, then I feel comfortable that the article can be trusted; but if one or other of my checks turns up a problem then I will do more checking, and if necessary will fail the article. Different reviewers will approach things differently, though I'd be disappointed if someone passed as GA or FA an article where they hadn't bothered to check if the contents were correct. I'll be starting to make some comments shortly. SilkTork *YES! 19:09, 21 December 2010 (UTC)

I believe not accepting in Good Faith is a violation of Wikipedia's core principles. I also find it very, very odd that a reviewer operates on that basis. I have never heard of this 'hard ass' approach before. I appreciate the principle and thoroughness, don't get me wrong, but it just seems way over the top. Still, there isn't much controversy over this subject. My main concern is that your approach will take forever. Dapi89 (talk) 23:10, 21 December 2010 (UTC)
You may be misunderstanding WP:AGF, which is about civility. I cannot assume good faith in regard to verifiability when checking that information in the article is correct. You've asked that the article be checked against GA criteria, which includes areas such as bias, and original research. The idea is that an uninvolved editor is doing an independent check. If we were simply to take people's word that the article is OK, then there would be no need for an independent check, you could just list the article as a GA yourself. Do you see?
I understand your concern that the GA review will take a while. Some reviews are quick, and some take a while. I've done reviews on simple, small articles which were well prepared, and had excellent easily accessible sources, in one day. Others have taken more than a month. It depends on circumstances. Also, as we are all volunteer workers on this charity educational project sometimes real life intervenes to slow things down. Sometimes people wait for months for a review, sometimes a review is picked up quickly by a reviewer. It's fairly random. Speed, unfortunately, is not something that is built into the system. Sometimes when people want a quick review they may directly ask a GA reviewer they know to look at an article. I've been asked several times, and I don't mind doing that.
I am interested in this topic, which is why I picked it, and I am looking forward to doing the review - I have already ordered Reach for the Sky; Flying Colours; Bader: the man and his men; The Bader Wing; and Bader's Tangmere Spitfire's from my local library, and two of those are in the library waiting for me to pick up; however, if you feel that you would rather somebody else looked at the review, I can delete this page, and allow the review to be picked up by someone else. No worries, no hard feelings. Let me know what you want to do. SilkTork *YES! 13:33, 22 December 2010 (UTC)
Please continue. You've already gone out of your way to order the books. Sounds find to me. I'm not exactly the most patient of types. I hope it is easy enough to follow. You might want to have the Mackenzie book rather than reach for the sky. It far easier to follow. But it is up to you. I hope the article doesn't ruin you're interest in Bader! Cheers. Dapi89 (talk) 13:44, 22 December 2010 (UTC)
I ordered the books that my library had, which should be more than sufficient - they didn't have Mackenzie. I don't actually read the books I get for GA reviews from cover to cover - it's a spot check. I dip in here and there, look at the contents page, at the index, and check out a couple of statements in the article. It doesn't take that long. The actual speed of a review, as I said, will vary, but I am not deliberately slow, though I would tend to prioritise checking the article than hurrying the review. I note on your userpage that you've been through a few GA reviews, so you know that they tend to vary. I also note that in one GA review the reviewer did explicitly say they were AGF regarding the sources. I have left a message for that reviewer as I would be interested to learn where this notion is coming from. Our guidelines - Wikipedia:Reviewing good articles and Wikipedia:What the Good article criteria are not do firmly indicate that sources need checking. Anyway, I look forward to doing the review, and working with you. Regards SilkTork *YES! 14:00, 22 December 2010 (UTC)

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
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    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
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Comments

  • CBE mentioned in lead but not in main body - his knighthood is mentioned, but that was a different, later, order. The opening sentence of the lead is quite cluttered. There is a balance between the need to cite statements that a reader might query, and making an article look and feel readable. I'm wondering if there is a need to cite all the decorations in the opening sentence. See WP:LEADCITE. On the question of decorations/awards, I note there isn't a specific section for that, nor one to overview Bader's impact and legacy. There is a Tributes section. I am wondering if a Legacy section might be helpful. Perhaps a Legacy section, with a subsection for Awards and or Tributes. It's just a suggestion. SilkTork *YES! 15:18, 22 December 2010 (UTC)
  • Could you check your sources that Bader's father served in the Royal Flying Corps. This source doesn't confirm that. It suggests that it was his uncle who was in the RFC, and that his father was a Civil Engineer who was commissioned into the RE and died while still serving with the army. Also check your sources regarding his rank. The online source says he was commissioned into the RE, and he has the title of major, yet the article says he was a sapper, which in the RE means a private (that is a non-commissioned soldier). SilkTork *YES! 00:12, 23 December 2010 (UTC)
I don't understand this one. I never wrote that his father was in the RFC. I put in that he was an RE engineer. Dapi89 (talk) 13:13, 3 January 2011 (UTC)
It's easy to forget. You added it June last year - [1]. No worries, it was removed the day before you made your comment: [2]. SilkTork *YES! 13:51, 8 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Closer citing is required. At the moment there is end paragraph citing, which may be acceptable, but there is a lot of varied information in some of the paragraphs, and some readers may wish to check some of the statements as they go along. Such as:
    • "Bader's step father did not become the father figure he needed."
    • "His mother showed little interest in Douglas and sent him to his grand parents on occasions."
    • "Bader's competitive nature saw him shoot his younger brother with an air gun at close range."
    • "His mother refused to allow Bader to attend Cambridge in December 1927, claiming she could not afford the fees."
    • "he found himself in a two-horse race for the Sword of Honour with Patrick Coote but lost." (the term "two-horse" is not needed - the sentence makes clear he is in a race with another person). The Sword of Honour link goes to the trilogy by Evelyn Waugh.
    • "the Bulldog had directional stability problems at low speeds which made such stunts exceptionally dangerous."
    • "after a long convalescence throughout which he needed morphine for pain relief"
  • This list is not exhaustive, just examples. Not every statement in an article needs citing, but strong statements such as those are best with a close cite. SilkTork *YES! 00:46, 23 December 2010 (UTC)
  • Could you check - "In June 1976 Bader was knighted for his services to disabled people.[133] His award was given by Prime Minister James Callaghan." I think the wording is wrong - nominated perhaps? SilkTork *YES! 01:12, 23 December 2010 (UTC)
  • The lead is quite good, though the opening sentence is problematic. Our guideline for writing the lead is WP:Lead which offers some good advice, particularly: "The lead section should briefly summarize the most important points covered in an article in such a way that it can stand on its own as a concise version of the article. The reason for the topic being noteworthy should be established early on in the lead. It is even more important here than for the rest of the article that the text be accessible. Consideration should be given to creating interest in reading the whole article. (See news style and summary style.) This allows editors to avoid lengthy paragraphs and over-specific descriptions, because the reader will know that greater detail is saved for the body of the article." The detail regarding planes shot down is perhaps too much for the opening sentence, and the number of honours might be reduced per MOS:BIO. The information is good, but could be included elsewhere.
Details in the lead should follow those in the main text. Lead says: "In 1928, Bader joined the RAF. On 14 December 1931 at Woodley airfield near Reading, he lost both his legs in an aircraft crash attempting a slow roll at very low level following jibes about his not wanting to perform aerobatics that day." Main text says: "In 1931 Douglas undertook training for the Hendon Air Show. Two pilots had been killed attempting aerobatics. The pilots were warned not to practice these manoeuvres under 2,000 feet and to keep above 500 feet at all times.[27] Nevertheless, on 14 December 1931, while visiting Reading Aero Club, he attempted some low-flying aerobatics at Woodley airfield in a Bulldog Mk. IIA, K1676, of 23 Squadron,[28] apparently on a dare." There had been some information in the previous section about when he was training in 1930 that "Receiving jibes from a rival squadron (No. 25 Squadron RAF), Bader took off to perform aerobatics and show off his skill." It's not clear what is going on, and the prose doesn't help. Bader "took off to perform..." - and then what? We are, to coin a pun, left in the air! I feel the lead section could do with an overhaul - make Bader's notability clearer in the opening sentence, reduce clutter. Make sure that important details in lead and main text match up. Make sure that the lead does adequately cover the main aspects of Bader's life. SilkTork *YES! 12:10, 27 December 2010 (UTC)
I did not make those inclusions (I don't think I did) I'll just delete them. Dapi89 (talk) 13:13, 3 January 2011 (UTC)
  • The prose is a little unclear in places. And sometimes uses casual language - "Douglas pestered the Air Ministry for a posting" - "pestered" is inappropriate, as is use of the first name. "Squadron Leader Geoffrey Stephenson, a close friend from his Cranwell days, was the commanding officer, and it was here that he got his first glimpse of a Spitfire." Who got a first glimpse? It reads as though it is Stephenson, though I think the intention was Bader. "After the French campaign, the RAF prepared for the coming Battle of Britain in which the Luftwaffe intended to achieve air superiority before attempting to launch an invasion of Britain, codenamed Operation Sealion." Operation Sealion could be the codename for a number of items in that sentence - Britain, the invasion, the French campaign, or the RAF preparations. I recommend asking someone from Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors to go through the article. SilkTork *YES! 12:10, 27 December 2010 (UTC)
"He levelled out at 24,000 ft, pulled himself together, and on taking a look around discovered he was now alone in the sky." The style and tone of this is inappropriate for an encyclopedia. It reads like a dramatic account. SilkTork *YES! 16:18, 27 December 2010 (UTC)
I don't see the complication. Its simple description of combat. Dapi89 (talk) 13:13, 3 January 2011 (UTC)
  • There is a reference section, though it uses the alternative system of shortened rather than full citation. This is acceptable for GA purposes, though consideration could be given to the standard and more widely used system of full citation as this is more useful to the reader wishing to check a particular source. Under the short system, the reader has to click through to the short cite, and then find the full citation in a different list. The short system can be improved by having a second click through to the detailed list, though this can be avoided by simply using the standard full citation method. SilkTork *YES! 12:21, 27 December 2010 (UTC)
I don't agree. Featured articles use this standard, which is far superior to messy long citations. I can't stand doing it any other way. As for the reader, its just tough. It stakes seconds to investigate. Dapi89 (talk) 13:13, 3 January 2011 (UTC)
Everything is sourced by a citation at the end of the paragraph. If you have specific instances, please list them. Dapi89 (talk) 13:17, 3 January 2011 (UTC)
  • There is almost nothing about Bader's career after he left the RAF, yet we are told that his "workload was exhausting", and "Throughout later life, he campaigned for the disabled and in 1976 was knighted for his services." Indeed he also got a CBE for his services for the disabled. What did he do? It must have been significant to get two major awards. We are told he "also became internationally famous", though this is not explained. Was it because of the book and film, Reach for the Sky? Given that a number of people will know about Bader from the film, a section on the making of both film and book, and Bader's involvement would be useful. What is Shell Aircraft Ltd? What achievements (if any) did Bader make as chairman? Was it purely a honorary title, or did he actually do something. Given Bader's personality, I can't imagine him accepting an empty post - I think he'd want a challenge. And it might be appropriate to mention the Bader Foundation in the Legacy section. SilkTork *YES! 16:18, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

On hold

There is much to like about this article. Information has been collected and presented in a logical manner. The prose could do with a decent copy-edit as it is inappropriate for an encyclopaedia; this may be due to sticking too closely to the source texts, which would be written with drama in mind. A little tightening up in that area should be enough, though it would help to get some experienced writers to do it from the Guild of copy-editors. It needs closer inline sourcing, so readers can directly check a statement, and it would be helpful to use the standard full citation style, rather than the short style, especially as some of the statements are quite personal, and quite strong. More coverage of Bader's life after the RAf, his Legacy, his combat technique, his charity work, and the book and film of his life would be useful. SilkTork *YES! 16:30, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

  • Amend and build lead per WP:lead and comments above
  • Extend coverage to:
    • Life after RAF
    • Legacy
    • Combat technique
    • Charity work
    • Chairmanship of Shell Aircraft
    • Reach for the Sky
  • Copy-edit
  • Closer citing
  • Sort out File:Douglas Bader.jpg

I'll put this on hold for an initial 14 days (to cover holiday period, and also to allow me to examine sources), and inform significant contributors and WikiProjects. SilkTork *YES! 16:30, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

Progress - looking to close

I'm pleased to see there has been some recent good progress. However, I have been reading some of the book sources I ordered from my local library, and I note that Bader didn't just train for Hendon, he took part, and won the pairs display with Harry Day, repeating the display two months later at Cramlington. What concerns me about this piece of information, is that I have - without any deep research - already uncovered basic mistakes and omissions in the research and sourcing for this article, and now more turns up

Dapi89, the nominator, has informed me that he will be unable to pay much attention to this review for the rest of the month, and has requested the GA be closed. Normally, as long there is progress being made, there is no need for a GA review to be closed because a nominator drops out. However, given that the basis for the article appears to be unsound, and therefore each statement will need checking, and thorough research will need to be done to ensure that there are no more significant mistakes and omissions, I think it would be better to close the review to allow people time to do the appropriate research and writing needed to bring this up to GA standards, and then to apply again.

I will keep this open to the 10th Jan to allow people to respond, and am prepared to keep the review open for a bit longer if someone puts forward a convincing case for being able to do the appropriate research and writing within a reasonable time span. SilkTork *YES! 13:51, 8 January 2011 (UTC)

It was not the same airshow, so there is no mistake. I did not have time to sort it out before you closed it. But I'll renominate it in Feb when I have a decent amount of time. Please read Turner's book carefully, there are some mistakes in it. Dapi89 (talk) 22:46, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
I've checked my sources and the statement as I wrote it was correct. Bader was in training for the Air Show in 1931, and he did not take part the following spring, because of the crash, December 1931. The competition you ment was the 1931 (spring) competition, which he won with Day. Dapi89 (talk) 14:48, 22 March 2011 (UTC)

Close

For various reason, as detailed above, this does not currently meet GA criteria, and there is insufficient progress on attending to the issues, so I am closing this as a fail. I do have at this point five books from my local library, so I may be nibbling at the article to see what improvements I can make. SilkTork *YES! 16:05, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Sports

Latest comment: 13 years ago23 comments8 people in discussion

I deleted this section for number of reasons:

a) There is no justification for having a separate section when his sporting life is discussed in Early Life anyway. And his sporting career was not extensive enough to warrant its own section.
b) Unreliable sources.
c) No evidence that Bader played cricket for the RAF much less scored 65 according to secondary sources despite being selected. He did play (it seems) in Germany as a POW in 1941-45 (or around that time).
d) Sort of ties in with (a) - rugby stuff is right and should be merged with what was there before. Dapi89 (talk) 10:26, 14 April 2011 (UTC)

Actually - fixes to (d) - rugby stuff was partially right. He did not play "a first class game" - it was a friendly match against a local team. Dapi89 (talk) 10:29, 14 April 2011 (UTC)
Can users please desist from removing the information about his sports career? He played for Harlequins, and was tipped for England. In other words he was a pretty notable rugby player pre-amputation. No idea about his cricket career, but it does seem fairly well attested, no pun intended.
There is more to this man than just his military life.
a) His sporting career is extremely notable, he was a formidable athlete. The fact he did not receive national caps later on, is almost certainly due to his accident.
b) Some of these sources are used in numerous rugby and cricket articles throughout Wikipedia. Personally I prefer print sources (since they remain available and don't flit around the internet), but these have to do for now.
c) I don't know a great deal about cricket, so there's not much to say about this. He does seem to have excelled at it though.
d) In many articles it is necessary to put the sports information in a separate section, since the player in question may be better known for something else, e.g. Eamon de Valera and Dick Spring were both notable rugby players (Spring was also a Gaelic footballer), but are much better known for their careers in Irish politics.
I am going to post this to the rugby union WP, since this matter has been discussed there in the past.--MacRusgail (talk) 12:42, 14 April 2011 (UTC)
The crux of the argument rests on finding and citing verifiable and authoritative sources. Once that is done, either situating the information chronologically or in a separate section is a secondary and minor concern. FWiW Bzuk (talk) 12:55, 14 April 2011 (UTC).
He did not receive national caps - end of story. Postulating this was because of injury is an opinion and impossible to prove.
More fool the sports articles. Perhaps they should use printed sources.
I do about the modern game, but not that far back so that makes both of us.
I strongly disagree. It was not notable and was over before it barely began.
Agree with Bzuk. Though it is pretty obvious this non-sporting 'career' never got going.
Trusting internet sources that do not reference their own is just not on. Dapi89 (talk) 14:05, 14 April 2011 (UTC)
Espncricinfo quotes his obituary in Wisden Cricketers Almanack, which gives brief details of his single first-class cricket match for the Army against the RAF in 1931 (he scored 65), and also mentions that he was in the running for an England rugby union cap at the time of his accident. [3]. It looks like websites are deprecated for referencing on this article but fortunately I've got a copy of the book so I'll paraphrase and cite. If you aren't familiar with this book, its generally regarded as the leading cricketing reference book and its obituaries are authoratative.--Bcp67 (talk) 17:31, 14 April 2011 (UTC)

It's true enough to say that "being in the running for an England cap" doesn't really mean anything, but I have a feeling that in "Reach for the Sky" Brickhill said that Bader had been selected for an England trial at the time of his accident. It's years since I read the book and I may be wrong, but the timing would fit - Bader's crash happened in December 1931, and England played South Africa at the start of 1932 so an England trial might well have been held around that time. Worth checking, if any of the regular editors of this orarticle have a copy handy.--Bcp67 (talk) 18:55, 14 April 2011 (UTC)

I'm not a cricket expert, but if it's down in Wisden, then that's pretty much "gospel", as cricket fans practically treat that book as scripture. I'm going to take this over to the cricket WP.
I think it is fairly obvious the injury finished his sporting career. After it, he'd only be able to play wheelchair rugby. I don't think that's even worth arguing about. If you lose both your legs, you're not even going to play for Bagford Vipers 6th XV. -MacRusgail (talk) 15:09, 15 April 2011 (UTC)
A match against the Army can be considered a pro 1st Class game? Even in those days? Dapi89 (talk) 15:59, 15 April 2011 (UTC)
Bader did indeed play a single first-class match for the RAF in 1931. His CricketArchive profile is here, along with details of the match against the Army here. He scored 65 in the RAF first-innings and just the one run in their second-innings. He played other matches for the RAF in 1931, but the aforementioned was his only notable appearance. Hope that helps. AssociateAffiliate (talk) 17:36, 15 April 2011 (UTC)
Can you tell me where it says "first class" on the website please?
Here is indicates he only ever played one game with the RAF and none with anyone else.
Thanks. Dapi89 (talk) 18:38, 15 April 2011 (UTC)
It was one single first-class game. If you click the link to the CricketArchive website it shows his "First-Class Career Batting and Fielding (1931)" record, covering that one game. You can also see slightly further up the page a link to "List of matches and detailed statistics for Douglas Bader", and from there "First-Class Matches played by Douglas Bader" - this has the link to that match, played at The Oval in July 1931, Army v Royal Air Force. (There are also two "other" matches, but they are not first-class so clearly not admissable as an indication of cricketing notability). From other indications on CricketArchive the RAF played a number of matches carrying first-class status between 1922 and 1946, of which this one. Granted we wouldn't see such a game as f-c nowadays but it would have been defined as such at the time - it wouldn't have been a professional game, but there were plenty of games back then which were f-c without being professional --Bcp67 (talk) 19:11, 15 April 2011 (UTC)
I'm from the cricket wikiproject answering MacRusgail's call. From the evidence cited immediately above, namely the cricketarchive scorecard reference, and the information on cricinfo, by our notability guidelines Bader would qualify for an article in his own right simply as a cricketer, without all of the other (admittedly highly important) material confirming notability. The match in question was clearly labelled as first-class, therefore first-class is what it is — a match at the highest domestic level of the game. I'm not going to comment on its location in the article, however it is clear that sport played an important part of his pre-accident life. If a reasonable paragraph can be fashioned out of his rugby and cricket exploits, I see no reason why it shouldn't form a sub-paragraph of the early years part of the article.
One thing I would say is that I would take issue with the latter part of this sentence: "A fine cricketer, he was selected for the RAF against the Army at The Oval in July 1931, a match rated as first-class at that time". The match is still rated as first-class. OK, as Bcp67 points out, such as match probably wouldn't be designated as such today, but the status hasn't (and won't be) rescinded. Also, whatever standard he was, and I've no doubt he was good, unfortunately you cannot say he was a "fine" cricketer without a reference. With only 2 meaningful scorecards (the first-class RAF match, and the school match on cricketarchive—scoring 25 against the Navy doesn't help to make him a "fine" player), there is not enough statistical material to say how good a batsman he was.
A better wording to my eyes would be to delete the "continued in military service" bit, and extend the sport paragraph (as: "He also played cricket for St Edward's, including scoring 59 and taking a wicket against Bromsgrove School; later, whilst in the RAF, he played in a first-class match against the Army at The Oval in 1931, scoring 65 and 1. He also played a non-first-class match against The Royal Navy."
I think I would also incorporate the footnote regarding the match in the POW camp at this point, and quote the Lucas reference, assuming the source uses the phrase "jack of all trades". Otherwise simply mentioning that he was an all-rounder would suffice.
I hope that helps,
—User:MDCollins (talk) 00:29, 16 April 2011 (UTC)
I have removed the word "fine" as it too silly to have. Scoring 65 once and going for (nearly) a duck 2nd Inns. is not my idea of fine. And there is too little evidence that he played in more than a handful of games - not even pro-level. Same with the rugger. Dapi89 (talk) 09:00, 16 April 2011 (UTC)
Rugby union wasn't (officially!) professional until the 1990s! It was perfectly possible for the likes of Gavin Hastings and David Campese to spend much of their career as amateurs, despite being the creme de la creme.--MacRusgail (talk) 20:32, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

The level of nonsense on this page regarding Bader the cricketer is staggering. He was a good cricketer selected for the RAF rep team. They held trials and wotnot. If you don't know and on WP Cricket many do, then don't be silly. — Preceding unsigned comment added by KestevenBullet (talk • contribs) 21:54, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

It is not silly. You are giving an exorbitant amount of time and space to s subject that doesn't deserve it. Particularly with tiny bits and pieces and a few sources. It doesn't justify anything than merging into what is already there. Dapi89 (talk) 15:11, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

I think there are enough comments in this discussion to justify the replacement of the deleted material.--MacRusgail (talk) 13:38, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

I don't see anyone plugging for that at all. WP:Undue weight should be invoked as well. The man did not even like the game much. Dapi89 (talk) 15:11, 21 April 2011 (UTC)
I would agree with MacRusgail. I'm not sure exactly how much has been removed and how much is present in a different place, but I fail to see how two 5-line paragraphs in a level three heading under Early Life can do any harm, nor promote undue weight. It would help to keep the relevant bio material (regarding his mother, education and Cambridge) together chronologically without jumping from 1931 to 1941 and back to 1927. As I said above, if he were just a cricketer and not a war hero, he would still be notable for an article, so one small paragraph here is fine. I don't know whether your "did not even like the game much" comes from the Lucas source - all the article says is that he pursued rugby preferring it to cricket. I'd also be interested to see whether the "jack of all trades" comes from a source? If it were me I would copy-edit it to remove this clumsy wording. If it is original, it should be in inverted commas.
Of your 4 "reasons for deletion" above, point a) I'd say there is enough info there, but would place it with the Early Life not elsewhere in the article. b)the cricket sources are reliable. c)evidence proved above. 65 is a good first-class score for an all-rounder. Ok, not many games at this level (that scorecards are available for), but it's there none-the-less. d) if we're tying rugby stuff together, add the cricket and form a paragraph in it's own right. Leave the education about St Edward's but take out the "During his time...older opponents" sentence and use it to form the sporting section. "While at St Edward's..."—User:MDCollins (talk) 23:04, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

"The man did not even like the game much." - I don't know about you, but if I don't like a game, I don't play it... And that includes cricket, which I don't play. Doesn't make much sense.--MacRusgail (talk) 17:22, 3 May 2011 (UTC)

That may be true, but he still did at a notable level. I only asked if that was a verifiable quote from the source provided.—User:MDCollins (talk) 21:57, 3 May 2011 (UTC)

Would it be suitable to mention the other locations named for Bader - for example Bader Way, on the housing estate which used to be RAF Hornchurch? 84.13.63.30 (talk) 19:45, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

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