Talk:Down in It/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tbhotch (talk · contribs) 19:06, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

   really?

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

   None

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Infobox

Y

Lead

• The lead is too short and do not summarizes the entire article, see WP:LEAD

Song information

• There are information with no references, and the information already there is based on lyrics only, aren't there reliable sources stating this?

Single release

• The section is unsourced, the tracklisting and releases subsections are unsourced

Music video

• "music video for "Down in It", filmed on location in the Warehouse District of Chicago by directors Eric Zimmerman and Benjamin Stokes, was released in September 1989." is unsourced

References

• All references need the proper citation style
• Dead link that needs to be replaced
• 6.^ Huxley (1997), p. 39/40 is mentioned, but, where is the name of the book and all the other information?

General

Comparing this article with Discipline (Nine Inch Nails song) or These Days (Powderfinger song), Down in It needs to be rewritten, add a background section, a complete critical reception section, expand the plot of the music video, and many stuff. Quick-fail per WP:GA?. Tbhotch.^™ Grammatically incorrect? Correct it! See terms and conditions. 19:06, 27 January 2012 (UTC)