Talk:Drache-class ironclad
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Krishna Chaitanya Velaga in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 02:06, 1 November 2016 (UTC)
Will come back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 02:06, 1 November 2016 (UTC)
- Section 1; sentence 1; "...launch of the French Gloire, the first ironclad warship", first ironclad of the world or Europe or France, mention that clearly.
- Done
- Section 1; Better mention who is "Kaiser Franz Josef I", something like "Emperor of Austria" etc.
- Added
- Section 1.1; para 1; beam measured 13.94 meters (45 ft 9 in); but in the infobox it is 14 m (45 ft 11 in)
- A legacy of when the article was based on Silverstone's less precise work - good catch.
- Section 1.1; para 1; they displaced 2,824 long tons (2,869 t) at normal load, and 3,110 long tons (3,160 t) at deep load; but in the infobox it is 2,779 long tons (2,824 t)
- Probably the same as above
- Is it possible to add the information about the later guns that were installed in 1867, in the infobox.
- Added
- Section 1.14; para 3; The frigates broadside ironclads; this looks a bit confusing. I think it is to "The frigates were broadside ironclads".
- Yeah, the "were" was missing.
- All the three images lack dates on their description pages. Please add approx. dates as I suggested on Talk:Kaiser Max-class ironclad (1862)/GA1.
- Added to all three
- Better to link "Prussia" and "Italy" on their first mention.
- Linked Prussia, but Italy is already linked in the design section.
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 08:30, 1 November 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
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Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 02:16, 3 November 2016 (UTC)