Talk:Dragutin Tomašević/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Sportsfan77777 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 00:37, 28 October 2019 (UTC)
Lead
- There are two pictures of him already on the commons. Is there a reason you didn't put one in the infobox?
Biography
- Does he have any gymnastic accomplishments?
- won a bronze medal in men's singles tennis ===>>> won a bronze medal in tennis in the men's singles competition.
- taking part in an skirmish ===>>> taking part in a skirmish
Overall
This is a good article that is short and well-written. I don't have many comments. Placing on hold. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 00:47, 28 October 2019 (UTC)
- Hi, Sportsfan77777. Thanks for taking the time to go over the article. I couldn't find any information pertaining to his gymnastics career. I've made the changes you recommended (hadn't noticed that the subject had a commons entry). What do you think? Amanuensis Balkanicus (talk) 12:39, 28 October 2019 (UTC)
- Looks good, passing! Good work! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 02:27, 29 October 2019 (UTC)
- Hi, Sportsfan77777. Thanks for taking the time to go over the article. I couldn't find any information pertaining to his gymnastics career. I've made the changes you recommended (hadn't noticed that the subject had a commons entry). What do you think? Amanuensis Balkanicus (talk) 12:39, 28 October 2019 (UTC)