Talk:Dreams and Nightmares

Latest comment: 1 year ago by 100cellsman in topic GA Review
Good articleDreams and Nightmares has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starDreams and Nightmares is the main article in the Dreams and Nightmares series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
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May 30, 2023Good article nomineeListed
January 13, 2024Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: 100cellsman (talk · contribs) 22:04, 29 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

Hi Kyle! I figured it was time for me to review your GA nominations out of reciprocation since you helped out with mine. I'll get to this one soon! OO 22:04, 29 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

"The album was named to year-end lists for 2012" needs copy edit

" heavily appreciated," just say appreciated.

"In a May 2012 interview for The Juice" should The Juice be italicized?

"though he was angry at having to share handcuffs with the Rolex watch on his wrist" I almost thought this was irrelevant, until I later read that it served as inspiration for the cover art. Perhaps these should be put together.

"seems obvious" -> seemed obvious

"He acknowledged "a tedious responsibility" of following standards for debuts through the likes of "sweeping themes" and reflective lyricism, concluding Mill's execution is competent and the "stuffy backward focus" fails to compliment him" I found this very wonky.

This is all I could say, hope to hear from you! OO 05:59, 30 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

100cellsman Thanks for this review, I have implemented everything apart from one change that I have clarified above. --K. Peake 09:18, 30 May 2023 (UTC)Reply
Passing the article now OO 19:41, 30 May 2023 (UTC)Reply