Talk:Drinkwise
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Australia
editWhy does this page just talk about Australia? Drinkwise exists elsewhere.— Preceding unsigned comment added by 80.192.119.44 (talk) 17:37, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
What needs doing?
editI quote from the template comments at the top of the article:
This article has multiple issues. Please help improve it or discuss these issues on the talk page.
- This article may require cleanup to meet Wikipedia's quality standards. (October 2009)
- This article needs additional citations for verification. (November 2012)
- This article contains content that is written like an advertisement. (April 2014)
- Tackling the last issue first, IMO much of the content reads like a government PR blurb; I guess that's "like an advertisement", tho' I'd've rather said "like a marketing pamphlet". Maybe there's not a whole lot of difference? So, I take it that the article may fail to have a NPOV (neutral point of view) and that's the real problem with its tone. To fix this, we need access to independent comment and review, so I propose to use Google and the "Ask a Librarian ..." template {{Template:WikiProject Australia/AAL/What}}.
- That research should turn up some more citations, and independent ones too, I hope.
- Are there any other aspects of "cleanup" I've missed, besides NPOV and citations, that this article needs?
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- Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20141111071617/https://www.drinkwise.org.au/our-work/drinking-do-it-properly-2/ to https://www.drinkwise.org.au/our-work/drinking-do-it-properly-2/
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