Talk:Drusus Julius Caesar/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Iazyges in topic Prose Suggestions

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 04:52, 24 July 2017 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 04:52, 24 July 2017 (UTC)Reply

Sorry for taking so long, I totally forgot about this. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:08, 23 August 2017 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y

Prose Suggestions

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  • "and he assumed all his offices at the same age as him." perhaps "and he assumed all of his offices at the same age Germanicus was when he took those offices".
  • "it should have reached Rome by 3 or 4 October." perhaps "would have" or "is likely to have", as its slightly more encyclopedic.
  • @SpartaN: that is all my suggestions. I'll pass the article after you deal with the one sentence lacking a citation, and leave you to deal with if you want to change the two things I've mentioned above. Sorry again for taking so long. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:54, 28 August 2017 (UTC)Reply
@Iazyges: It's fine. I've been away from Wikipedia for the last couple weeks anyway, but I should have time tonight. SpartaN (talk) 18:03, 29 August 2017 (UTC)Reply
@SpartaN: You've probably already got the notification, but I forgot to mention it here as well: I referenced the last sentence, so I've passed it. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 18:06, 29 August 2017 (UTC)Reply