Talk:DyAnne DiSalvo
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Copyediting needed
editArticle has minor compliance issues with the manual of style. Among them:
- need to convert "curvy quotes" to "straight quotes" (e.g. ’ should be ' and “ should be ") see WP:PUNC.
- need to remove most embedded external links, and move any remaining to a separate "External links" section at the end of the article, see WP:EL. In particular, the Amazon links to here books are promotional and must be removed.
- WP:MOSBIO#Subsequent uses of names
- The repeated listing of publisher in the text is both promotional and non-encyclopedic (in that context)
- Link only on first reference (generally) see Wikipedia:Overlinking#Overlinking_and_underlinking
External links modified
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