Talk:E=MC² (Mariah Carey album)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sauloviegas (talk · contribs) 01:18, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

Pre review commments

• Going to review soon! - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:18, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for taking the time to review it Saulo! :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 20:58, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

So sorry it's taking me so long! I'll put the review up this weekend. :) - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 01:08, 24 November 2011 (UTC)

First look through

• One dead link: http://www.cbc.ca/arts/story/2006/03/31/musicsales-coldplay.html . Fix it.

Infobox

• The release date there is April 8, 2008, when the first date in the release history is April 4, 2008.

Lead

• Four singles were commission -> Four singles were commissioned
• Avoid repeating "Carey" too much in the last paragraph. You've used it three times in a row.

Background and recording

• Carey spoke of her sentiments on the album -> Carey spoke of her sentiments on the album:

Critical reception

• 'It received a 64/100'. The "Professional ratings" box and source says 63/100.
• Writing fir Entertainment Weekly -> Writing for Entertainment Weekly
• Try to replace 'Carey' with 'the singer' and 'her' when appropriate. You repeated 'Carey' a lot.

Comments

• I'll continue later! :) - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 15:58, 8 December 2011 (UTC)

  Is this going to be finished? At over a month the review should have been done by now. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 18:22, 24 December 2011 (UTC)

  Calm down! It's holiday season, and I'm completly out of time. I also have other articles to see and take care. I will finish tomorrow, because I'm going to have dinner really soon. Also, there are a lot of reviews that stay online for over two months, so just wait a little. - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 18:54, 24 December 2011 (UTC)

  Ok, fix these little issues before I continue. - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 16:58, 3 January 2012 (UTC)

Saulo. It's been nearly two months. Please just post the full review so I can address it in an organized fashion.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 01:32, 6 January 2012 (UTC)