I cleaned up the text a little, correcting grammar, punctuation and spelling. --BwB (talk) 17:56, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
I plan a revamp and update this article during the next week. The edits will identify E-OTD as a 3GPP standard, provide a short description of how it works, give a few historical details, clarify the role of LMUS, and provide more references. Chris Cdrane (talk) 06:15, 21 July 2010 (UTC)
I've expanded the article, and added the appropriate references (all edits on the 29th were by myself). Please comment if anyone has any further suggestions. Cdrane (talk) 00:37, 29 July 2010 (UTC)