Talk:Edna Fischel Gellhorn

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Courtneyduval

Great article! I think the thing hardest thing but most essential is adding more information that will make the article more dense. Some of your sections only have one or two sentences, so I would work on adding more to those. If you can't find anymore information pertaining to that specific section, consider combining the section with another section that it could be relevant to. Also, in the legacy section, you say that Gellhorn's legacy includes her daughter Martha. While you did attach a hyper link, it might be helpful to the reader if you include a sentence or two about what she accomplished to be categorized in the legacy section rather than the family section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Courtneyduval (talkcontribs) 14:56, 13 October 2016 (UTC)Reply