Talk:Eduardo Núñez/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Basilisk4u in topic GA Review

GA Review

edit

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Basilisk4u (talk · contribs) 00:19, 21 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Hi! I will review this article. Cheers! Basilisk4u (talk) 00:19, 21 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Notes

edit
Lead
  • Add that he is Dominican in the first sentence: Eduardo Michelle Núñez Mendez (born June 15, 1987) is a Dominican professional baseball infielder.
  • What do you mean by a "natural" shortstop? I would suggest saying "Although shortstop is his main position, the Yankees have used Núñez as a utility infielder, and have played him in the outfield as well."
Career
  • I recommend placing "Majors" and "Minors" subsections within this section so readers can tell when he was called up
  • This section looks good!
Scouting profile
References
  • Online sources such as MLB.com should not be italicized
  • Add ... around MLB.com, it will take away the italicization
General
  • Is there any information about his early life? Is there a source for him being born in Santo Domingo?
    • Sadly, I see nothing about his personal life out there, just that the Yankees signed him when he was 16. I can find a source that says he's a native of Santo Domingo. – Muboshgu (talk) 21:04, 22 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

On hold

edit

I have put the review on hold in order for these concerns to be addressed. Good luck! Basilisk4u (talk) 00:30, 21 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

My concerns have been addressed! Passing the article. Nice job! Basilisk4u (talk) 23:03, 23 June 2012 (UTC)Reply