Talk:Edward Elric/GA1
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Xtzou in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 19:03, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I am reviewing this article. I think it is very well done and have only a few questions:
- "Edward behaves in a childish manner about his short height; he tends to humorously overreact to any comment about it (and often misinterprets the words) in a fit of rage" - he is "humorous" and "in a fit of rage" at the same time? Or how does that work?
- Removed humorous. It works like a comic relief in the series.Tintor2 (talk) 19:14, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
- "Despite his occasional bouts of immaturity, he is a selfless, strong, independent and mature young adult that gains a reputation as a "hero of the people"." - How can he be immature and mature at the same time? I assume that he shifts between seeming immature and mature.
- Fixed.Tintor2 (talk) 19:14, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
- "Edward's childhood friend, Winry Rockbell, designed Edward's automail limbs alongside her grandmother Pinako." What does "alongside her grandmother" mean?
- Fixed.Tintor2 (talk) 19:14, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
- "allows Edward to float between the comical moments and the underlying drama without seeming false." - This is word for word from the source. The wording should be changed, or it should be put in quotes.
- Fixed.Tintor2 (talk) 19:14, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
I will put the article on hold while you address these issues. Thanks, Xtzou (Talk) 19:03, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality: Well written
- B. MoS compliance: Complies with the basic MoS
- A. Prose quality: Well written
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources: Sources are reliable
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: Well referenced
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources: Sources are reliable
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects: Sets the context
- B. Focused: Remains focused on topic
- A. Major aspects: Sets the context
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail: Pass!
- Pass or Fail: Pass!
- Nice job! Xtzou (Talk) 19:43, 6 May 2010 (UTC)