Talk:Edward Elric/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Xtzou in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 19:03, 6 May 2010 (UTC)Reply

Hi, I am reviewing this article. I think it is very well done and have only a few questions:

  • "Edward behaves in a childish manner about his short height; he tends to humorously overreact to any comment about it (and often misinterprets the words) in a fit of rage" - he is "humorous" and "in a fit of rage" at the same time? Or how does that work?
  • "Despite his occasional bouts of immaturity, he is a selfless, strong, independent and mature young adult that gains a reputation as a "hero of the people"." - How can he be immature and mature at the same time? I assume that he shifts between seeming immature and mature.
  • "Edward's childhood friend, Winry Rockbell, designed Edward's automail limbs alongside her grandmother Pinako." What does "alongside her grandmother" mean?
  • "allows Edward to float between the comical moments and the underlying drama without seeming false." - This is word for word from the source. The wording should be changed, or it should be put in quotes.

I will put the article on hold while you address these issues. Thanks, Xtzou (Talk) 19:03, 6 May 2010 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:   Well written
    B. MoS compliance:   Complies with the basic MoS
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:   Sources are reliable
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:   Well referenced
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:   Sets the context
    B. Focused:   Remains focused on topic
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: Pass!