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"and he later received degrees from the Cambridge University and Oxford University" perhaps you meant to say "from the Universities of Cambridge and Oxford".
Indeed! Done
"at King's College, Cambridge as " comma after Cam.
Done
"Clocke?. " don't need that double punc.
Done
"former is particularly moving" seems like someone's opinion.
Clarified
"1603 London plague outburst which " link. And shouldn't it be "to which"?
"To which" seems better; linked to bubonic plague as I don't think a more specific article exists for that time
"more famous Orlando" is "more famous" needed? Encyclopedic even?
Changed to "better-known", if that's better? I would say yes, since Edward is minor figure compared to Orlando
"c. 1540–1595" if it's only the 1540 which is circa, this should be c. 1540 – 1595.
I believe both are uncertain
Just checked, and your version makes more sense
If this is BritEng (with strong ties I would imagine that makes sense), baptised is with an s, not a z. Check throughout.
Standardized, I believe
"from Cambridge University and" the University of Cambridge.
Done
Likewise for "the other place".
Done
"1591/1592" previously just used two digits on the second year in consecutive year range like this. Check throughout.
Standardized
"couple would have six" had?
Done
"quarter shillings split" link specifically not to a generic article about "shilling".
