Talk:Edward Porter Alexander/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 16:04, 18 June 2014 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:04, 18 June 2014 (UTC)Reply

Comment: Copyedited. - Dank (push to talk) 16:44, 18 June 2014 (UTC)Reply

Is there an ETA on this? I'm in no hurry since I'm not on much these days, just checking. Wizardman 19:58, 6 July 2014 (UTC)Reply

Sorry for the delay.
  • External links good, no DABs.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • Major Albert J. Myer, the first U.S. Army Signal Officer probably better rephrased as the first officer assigned to the Signal Corps or somesuch.
  • It's not clear what is meant by chief of ordnance. Can you elucidate?
  • Link Dept. of East Tennessee.
  • Add some mention of his post-war activities to the lede.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:22, 11 July 2014 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review! Issues fixed, was harder than I expected to find somewhere that simply explained what chief of ordnance was; tis basically the main supply guy. Wizardman 02:17, 15 July 2014 (UTC)Reply