Talk:Ego Death (song)

DYK nomination

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:02, 24 July 2020 (UTC)

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Ty Dolla Sign

• ... that Ty Dolla Sign's (pictured) song "Ego Death" is a "first-ever of its kind" 9D listening experience? Source: "As for "Ego Death," Dolla $ign partnered up with Triller to create a 9D experience for the listener -- the first-ever of its kind."

• Reviewed: Marty Kirkby

Created by Nice4What (talk). Self-nominated at 20:19, 1 July 2020 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: - Not done
Overall: Nice article, Copyvio score great at 5.7%. Should be good to go after QPQ! Let me know when you have done that. Ashleyyoursmile! 05:20, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

• @Ashleyyoursmile: QPQ complete. Nice4What (talk · contribs) – (Thanks ♥) 18:49, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

• Ready to go! Ashleyyoursmile! 14:44, 11 July 2020 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Ego Death (song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 14:41, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

Per your request. Dance music is probably the genre that interests me the most so this should be fun to review! LOVI33 14:41, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• This article is about the house song → This article is about the Ty Dolla Sign song; or something along those lines

•  Done --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

• it expands on West's "Fade" → it expands on West's 2016 song "Fade"

•  Not done I noted the release year in the body so I don't think I need to here as well --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

• I'm kinda confused about what "the former" is in "Initially previewed after the Coachella Valley Music and Arts Festival in April 2019, the former experienced an internet leak in March 2020"

• Because "Fade" was referenced second in the previous sentence, I thought I would use the former to differentiate... or should it be the song instead, as I only use "it" previously? --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

• US Billboard Bubbling Under Hot 100 chart → US Bubbling Under Hot 100 chart, published by 'Billboard

•  Done --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

Background and recording

• I've been told that Quoteboxes are discouraged in music-related articles. Perhaps a switch to the {{Quote}} template would be better.

• Are you sure this is correct since I've seen GAs like "Frail State of Mind" use quoteboxes, plus blockquote looks awkward at the beginning of a section? --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

• Prose looks amazing!

Composition and lyrics

• House music is a style Club (EDM). Are you sure it should be listed?
• to "Fade" by West → to "Fade" as it was mentioned above that it is by West

•  Done for the above --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

Release and promotion

• The song later experienced a release to US → The song was later serviced to US

•  Done --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

References

• No copyright violations!
• All citations look good!

Verdict

• Overall, it is an amazingly well-written article. Only a few concerns so I will put this article  On hold for now. Defiantly GA quality. Good job! LOVI33 03:26, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

• LOVI33 Thanks a lot for the review over a short period of time, I have implemented most of the changes and left comments for you regarding the others. --K. Peake 07:03, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

• Great! ✓ Pass. LOVI33 14:41, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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