Talk:El Amor (Ricardo Arjona song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 02:00, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

• 2 deadlinks
• Consistency between DMY and MDY.

Lead

• Written by Arjona, the song was produced by himself alongside longtime collaborators Dan Warner and Lee Levin under their stage name Los Gringos, and enjoyed additional production work from Puerto Rican singer-songwriter Tommy Torres. --> Extremely awkward sentence.
• Lyrically, "El Amor" was created by Arjona in an attempt to show all sides of love, explaining that "So many good things about love has been shown, that somebody had to turn it around and tell the bad ones". --> "El Amor" was written by Arjona in an attempt to show all sides of love.
• #1 --> number one
• Specify that Billboard is the US. (eg US Billboard)
• and appeared on three year-end charts from Billboard at the end of 2011. --> Very odd. I suggest removing.
• An accompanying music video was released in September 2011. --> An accompanying music video for "El Amor" was released in September 2011.
• As of 11 July 2012, the video has reached 14 million views on YouTube. --> This isn't a lead worthy thing.

Composition

• The bit rate in the sample needs to be reduced.
• created --> written

Chart performance

• Some countries are not capitalized.
• # --> number

• Fix this later. Have to go. Cheers. —Hahc21 14:26, 13 July 2012 (UTC)

• Please do not add simply add a source stating a song reached #1 in a country. Every source needs that states a chart position must include the provider of the information. The chart does not provide publisher on the Argentine singles chart for example. The Colombian singles needs to proven by the source itself (in this case, National-Report), and here's a source I found to confirm that it indeed reached #1 in Colombia. Erick (talk) 08:21, 14 July 2012 (UTC)

Promotion

• Seems more appropriate to be entitled "release and promotion"
• "El Amor" was in the set list for a televised program in 2011 --> What program?

• It was a special 1 hour program dedicated to the album. I'm still looking for the name, since the sources i found says nothing bout it.

Ok, i have fixed all above. Cheers! —Hahc21 14:05, 13 July 2012 (UTC)

Oh, no. Still have to fix dates. —Hahc21 14:08, 13 July 2012 (UTC)

Ok, All fixed. —Hahc21 14:14, 13 July 2012 (UTC)