Talk:El Costo de la Vida/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:06, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
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I can get this done in one day! --K. Peake 08:06, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Shouldn't "Burbujas de Amor" be listed as another B-side in the infobox per the track listing?
- Areíto Studios → 4:40 since that is the correct name and you don't use the term studios in infobox
- "his sixth studio album" → "his sixth studio album,"
- "The track is a" → "It is a"
- Remove the introduction to Loketo since this is only needed in the body
- Wikilink soukous to itself
- "and Guerra performs it as" → "and is performed by Guerra as"
- "It was released as" → "The song was released as" and make this the second sentence of this paragraph instead
- In the second para, move the music video info to being after critical and commercial reception
- "The accompanying music video for the song" → "The music video for the song"
- "but it still received" → "despite still receiving"
- Reword the award sentence to mentioning that it won the Tropical Song of the Year award at the 1993 Lo Nuestro Awards with the pipe
- "in the US." → "in the United States." per MOS:US on the first being the first mention in the new order, also add that it was his first chart topper
Background and composition
edit- Pipe merengue to Merengue music on the audio sample text
- Wikilink Juan Luis Guerra
- Remove commas around Bachata Rosa
- "as for music for" → "as music for" to avoid duplicate usage of for
- "than the last one"." → "than the last one."" per MOS:QUOTE
- Remove the comma after cha-cha-cha
- "and song's composer" → "and song composer"
- "in Guerra sings about" → "in which Guerra sings about"
- "not Mitsubishi, not Chevrolet"." → "not Mitsubishi, not Chevrolet."" with the pipe
- "a measure of coffee"" → "a measure of coffee"."
- "He also makes references" → "Guerra also makes references"
Music video
edit- "The news monitors behind the singer depicts" either change to the news monitor if it is only one or to depict if you mean multiple monitors
- Remove the comma after Chilean military dictatorship
- "The video also intersperses with scenes" → "This content is interspersed with scenes"
- "in the category" → "in the category of"
- Pipe 5th Annual Lo Nuestro Awards to Premio Lo Nuestro 1993
- "It was nominated" → "It was nominated for"
- Fix the misspelling of international on the award's name
Promotion and reception
edit- "was released as album's" → "was released as the album's"
- Wikilink greatest hits album
- Allmusic → AllMusic with the wikilink
- "boundaries of salsa" citing" → "boundaries of salsa", citing"
- "The Boston Globe reviewer Fernando Gonzalez" → "The Boston Globe reviewer Fernando Gonzalez" with the wikilink
- "Despite the latter's concern," → "Despite the editor's concern,"
- Add a full-stop after Tropical Song of the Year
- "It was recognized as" → "The track was recognized as"
Track listing
edit- Shouldn't the titles be surrounded by speech marks?
Charts
editWeekly charts
edit- Wikilink Hot Latin Songs
Year-end charts
edit- Good
See also
edit- Good
References
edit- Copyvio score looks really good at 29.1%!!!
- Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 4
- Wikilink Temple University Press on ref 5
- Any publisher to link MacFarland to on ref 6?
- WP:OVERLINK of ProQuest and pipe La Prensa de San Antonio to La Prensa (San Antonio) on ref 8
- Wikilink University of Chicago Press on ref 12
- Pipe Univision Communications to TelivisaUnivision on ref 16
- El Siglo de Torreón → El Siglo de Torreon with the wikilink on ref 19
- Boston Globe → The Boston Globe with the wikilink on ref 26
- Austin American Statesman → Austin American-Statesman with the wikilink on ref 28
- WP:OVERLINK of Los Angeles Times on ref 31
Final comments and verdict
edit- On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this went smoothly like I planned! --K. Peake 09:06, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake Hope I got all of them in one go this time (fingers crossed) Erick (talk) 03:30, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, I did some slight copy editing but this is good to go! --K. Peake 07:07, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake Hope I got all of them in one go this time (fingers crossed) Erick (talk) 03:30, 10 February 2023 (UTC)