Talk:Elastic recoil detection

Initial discussion

There is a discussion of recent changes to this article here[1]. Xxanthippe (talk) 23:54, 25 April 2014 (UTC).

Added section header. Evensteven (talk) 04:03, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

Suggesting that the discussion at the Project talk page be continued here.

Current note: I am not satisfied that my "step 7" edit is correct. The article text I replaced referred to the hand reference I used to create the replacement citation, but that hand reference included no article title, and the article title that the text mentioned is identical to another much-quoted citation from some of the same authors, same journal, same year (different pages). This could use an expert eye. Evensteven (talk) 18:25, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

I am not happy about the step 8 edit either. While it does remove the last hand reference, it is not clear what the target of the citation is. The thing is cited twice, and appears to be an animation, but there is not enough info to fire it up. In addition, the two citations don't seem to me to be in places where a single animation would suffice (but I can't really tell for sure). Finally, the article text they are attached to almost seem like captions rather than sentences or paragraphs. All in all, this looks like incomplete placeholder material. Now that's it present in the article history, where we can always get it back later, I am going to feel free to delete it as I edit more text, unless someone says something first. Evensteven (talk) 18:51, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

Recent edits seem to be going in the direction of where I was headed next, and since re-organization and rewrite benefit from a greater expertise, I think I'll hand it off to the rest of you for now. Looks like it's in solid hands. Evensteven (talk) 18:10, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

External links modified

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified one external link on Elastic recoil detection. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

• Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20140512224903/http://www.photonis.com/en/ism/23-time-of-flight-detectors.html to http://www.photonis.com/en/ism/23-time-of-flight-detectors.html

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true or failed to let others know (documentation at {{Sourcecheck}}).

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

• If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
• If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 23:07, 21 December 2016 (UTC)