Talk:Electron/GA1

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The article looks excellent in general, as your articles do. Ceran →(cheer→chime →carol) 03:02, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

Prose

This prose is excellent, but a few things remain: Etymology:

• The English name electron is a combination of the word electric and the suffix -on, with the latter now used to designate a subatomic particle.. - Unclear, do you mean to note that protons and neutrons end in -on?

Observation:

• This allows very precise measurements to be made of the particle properties. - Add 'for' in front of very.
• Measurements allowed the magnetic moment the electron to be measured to a precision of eleven digits, which, in 1980, was a greater accuracy than for any other physical constant.[132] - Fragment, did you mean to put a comma after moment?

Alright, that seems to be it. ₪Ceran →(cheer→chime →carol) 12:46, 10 January 2009 (UTC)

Thank you. I hope I have addressed these to your satisfaction.—RJH (talk) 17:15, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

References

• Refs 26 and 82 should indicate subscription is required. Ceran →(cheer→chime →carol) 03:09, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

• Ref. 26 has a link to a free google copy; is that sufficient? I added a note to #83. Thank you for your review.—RJH (talk) 17:15, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

• Then, no further need not to pass. ₪Ceran →(slip→sled →snow) 20:14, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
  • Thank you.—RJH (talk) 22:26, 14 January 2009 (UTC)