Talk:Elena (Street Fighter)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 02:49, 25 May 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Infobox

1. Voice cast inconsistently mentioned; only Kaoru mentioned outside of infobox, but only in lead.
   1. Fixed
2. Needs to mention her Kenyan origin at some point, ideally in both lead and body
   1. Fixed

Lead

1. I feel like the other media appearances could be summed up as "she appeared in other media" rather than listing examples.
   1. Fixed

Appearances

1. Is it valuable to go into detail about her role in the other appearances?
   1. I don't believe I can condense that down more

Promotion and reception

1. GamesRadar+ reception could be paraphrased more; also, it'd be helpful to explain why she was unlike Balrog, if possible.
2. Some other reception could be paraphrased more.
   1. Fixed

Images

1. I'm still mixed about the Akuma shot.
   1. Really works well with the comments about her story being too simple, especially Den of Geek's?

References

1. Is MyFigureCollection reliable?
   1. It's cited heavily by other websites, and in magazines like AniMagazin. It's generally regarded as one of the go-to sites for cataloguing released figures now.
2. Is Planet Xbox reliable?
   1. They were part of Complex Networks before they shut down and were folded into the main site.

External links

1. Are these required?
   1. Removed

I'm somewhat mixed about the second image, but not enough to say that it doesn't pass muster.