Talk:Elijah Hewson/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Launchballer (talk · contribs) 04:03, 13 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Royiswariii (talk · contribs) 05:54, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).	All of the citations and websites are reliable.
	2c. it contains no original research.
	2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).	I'm little bit confused on Family Tree but it seems you have a citations for that so i'll approved it.
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
	7. Overall assessment.	The article it was good and i'm little confused on that Family Tree section (I'm a newbie on GA Reviewing), but it seems are on good from the top to the end.

Vacant0

Looks like another driveby review, so I'll go through this again and review it myself. First of all:

• There is unlikely any copyright violation in the article. Earwig's Copyvio Detector has reported only 11.5% in similarity.
• There are no cleanup banners, such as those listed at WP:QF, in the article.
• The article is stable.
• No previous GA reviews. The review above did not address all six criteria, therefore I won't count it as I'm technically re-reviewing it.

Looks good for now. Let's go more in depth.

• Prose, spelling, and grammar checking.
  • No major issues were found in the article. I've made a minor improvement. See Special:Diff/1246856438.
• Checking whether the article complies with MOS.
  • The article complies with the MOS:LEDE, MOS:LAYOUT, and MOS:WTW guidelines. There is no fiction and embedded lists within the article, so I am skipping MOS:WAF and MOS:EMBED. Overall, the article is relatively short, so the section merging is appropriate, the lede's length is okay, and it summarises the article, and there are no biased words in the article.
• Checking refs, verifiability, and whether there is original research.
  • References section with a {{reflist}} template is present in the article.
  • No referencing issues.
  • Most references are reliable.
    • What does make Ref 20 (music-news.com) reliable?

Per [1] they have an editor and staff, and this is a not terribly controversial claim made in an interview.

• • • What does make Loris Cantarelli reliable?

This has gone through Hoepli, a publishing house, but out of an abundance of caution I've replaced it.

• • Spotchecked Ref 1, 3, 5, 6, 8, 9, 17, 22, 23, 28–all verify the cited content. AGF on other citations.
  • Copyvio already checked.
• Checking whether the article is broad in its coverage.
  • Mention the place of birth in the body.

Done.

• • Wikilink Inhaler (band) at the first mention in the body.

Done, although it was my understanding that topics should only be linked to once per article. What's the policy on this?

Once per major section in an article (MOS:LINKONCE). A topic is usually wikilinked once or twice (depending on the article's size) in the body. 10:54, 22 September 2024 (UTC)

• • Mention Neil McCormick's occupation.

I think adding "for The Daily Telegraph" should be sufficient for this, by all means advise if it isn't.

Yes, that's good enough. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 10:54, 22 September 2024 (UTC)

• • Wikilink Guggi and Quincy Jones in the body.

Done.

• Checking whether the article is presented from an NPOV standpoint.
  • The article meets the criteria and is written in encyclopedic language.
• Checking whether the article is stable.
  • As noted in the initial comments, the article has been stable.
• Checking images.
  • Optional: Add alt text to the infobox image.

Done.

• • The infobox image is properly licensed.

Overall, it looks good for a short article, @Launchballer:. There are some minor issues that should be fixed, after which the article should retain its GA status. Cheers, Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 14:51, 21 September 2024 (UTC)

I believe I've addressed all of your concerns @Vacant0:.--Launchballer 22:12, 21 September 2024 (UTC)

Yup, looks good now. Congratulations. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 10:55, 22 September 2024 (UTC)