Talk:Elizabeth Scott Flood
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 September 2018 and 6 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Marcelorieg.
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edit-There are several redundant sentences in the accident portion of the article. -Who is BEA (Flight Recorders section)? There are several aviation related acronyms in this article that do not have definitions or links to the meaning of the acronym. For exemple: ATC, FDR, CVR, etc. Marcelorieg (talk) 20:04, 2 November 2018 (UTC)
- Nasim Basiri (Peer Review): Hi Marcello, This is a great start. Please put headings for your article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Basirinasim (talk • contribs) 22:40, 28 November 2018 (UTC)
- Prof. Smith Feedback: Hi Marcelo, You definitely have a very good start on your article and only minor changes to make to get it into shape. It is very thorough and nicely written. Here are the changes that I suggest as you work toward your final draft:
- Remove the citations right after the title. Wikipedia article titles never have citations. Your sources are documented so thoroughly below that you don't need them next to the title. - I realize that it is difficult to refer to a person who has so many different last names, but it seems strange to refer to her as "Elizabeth." Can you come up with a way to refer to her by her last name throughout the article that won't confuse readers (maybe "Scott Flood")? - Remember that you need "See Also" and "External Links" sections to have a complete assignment. See the article template that I handed out in class, and that is posted on our Canvas homepage, for details on what to include in these sections and how to format them. — Preceding unsigned comment added by StaceySmithOSU (talk • contribs) 04:44, 1 December 2018 (UTC)