Talk:Ellie (The Last of Us)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Anarchyte (talk · contribs) 11:10, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

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• Copyvio rating: 37.9% chance

Half of the 'violations' are just the words "The Last of Us" so there's no real worry there.

The lead

• [...] later assuming the role of the playable protagonist for a portion, a role she reprised in the downloadable content campaign The Last of Us: Left Behind.

I'm assuming this means; "the player can play as Ellie for a portion of the game which is then repeated in the downloadable content campaign The Last of Us: Left Behind."

Not too big of a deal, could be re-worded but shouldn't affect the overall outcome (IMO).

Edit: Since this has been posted, the sentence has been changed.

Character design

• Everything is fine here

Attributes

• Everything is fine here

Appearances

• Everything is fine here

Reception

• Everything is fine here

References

• Everything is fine here

Overall review

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and y:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

   Reviewer Comment: There were a few reverts (good faith) last month although they calmed down very quickly. I'm passing this section because no one violated the 3RR rule.

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail: (Pass)

This article easily passes all (except for one, see the Reviewer Comment above) of the GA criteria. The only issue I found in the article is the sentence in the lead that isn't phrased very well. There is a good amount of imagery in the article, all Non-Free images have a full Non-Free template and the image of Ashley Johnson is under the Creative Commons. --Anarchyte 11:10, 25 June 2015 (UTC)