Talk:Elliot Salkow

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  •   Comment: Apart from not being cause and effect, "In recognition of his contributions, Elliot Salkow was named among the top 10 wealthiest South Africans in the technology sector by the Sunday Times in 2013. His dedication to innovation and commitment to excellence earned him respect and admiration within the " is not neutral. The disconnect between In recognition of his contributions and Elliot Salkow was named among the top 10 wealthiest South Africans in the technology sector is startling. He was recognised for his bank balance! 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 18:47, 16 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
  •   Comment: Content like "known for his generosity, approachable demeanor, and mentorship to colleagues and employees. Salkow's leadership at Ellies Electronics not only shaped the company's success but also inspired a new generation of entrepreneurs in South Africa" is really not suitable for a neutral tone encyclopaedia. Theroadislong (talk) 18:10, 16 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hi folks, as part of NPP, I have cleaned up the possible POV contents in the article. Anyone can then remove the tag if the neutrality is no more disputed. Safari ScribeEdits! Talk! 08:23, 8 September 2024 (UTC)Reply