Talk:Ellis Gibbons/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Amitchell125 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 09:40, 27 July 2020 (UTC)
I'm happy to review this article, it looks rather interesting.
- Nice to see you again Amitchell125, indeed it was an interesting one to work on. For context, I had been working on his brother, Orlando (which will be a long process...), and thought it might be fun to get Ellis up to GA standard since there is so little information on him in the first place. Thanks for reviewing! Aza24 (talk) 01:42, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
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More on its way. Amitchell125 (talk) 08:37, 29 July 2020 (UTC) |
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I'll put the article on hold for a week until 6 August. Please feel free to ask anything regarding the review. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 13:48, 29 July 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you for your comments Amitchell125, thorough as always! I haven't gotten through them all yet, especially some of your suggestions, but I will let you know when I get through them all. Also, I noticed Ceoil had mentioned I take a look at your article at FAC, are you still pursuing this nomination? (some people were pretty harsh about the prose and such)
- And thank you for your excellent work so far on this article, Aza24. Still hoping that Edward Daniell can achieve FA, as it seems to be just the prose that needs some more work. Any suggestions from a fresh pair of eyes would be appreciated! Amitchell125 (talk) 15:56, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
- Amitchell125, I believe I've gotten through everything. Btw – I'll leave some initial comments on your article soon and probably more over the next couple of days.
- Aza24, thanks for the above, I see that a couple of outstanding points still remain to be addressed. Amitchell125 (talk) 07:50, 2 August 2020 (UTC)
- Amitchell125, I believe I've gotten through everything. Btw – I'll leave some initial comments on your article soon and probably more over the next couple of days.
- And thank you for your excellent work so far on this article, Aza24. Still hoping that Edward Daniell can achieve FA, as it seems to be just the prose that needs some more work. Any suggestions from a fresh pair of eyes would be appreciated! Amitchell125 (talk) 15:56, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
Passing
editPassing the article now, and it was a pleasure to review it for you. Amitchell125 (talk) 21:08, 2 August 2020 (UTC)