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edit- From Biosthmors
- Thanks for your work on this
- Don't cite things in WP:HEADINGS
- I'd spell out millimeter in the WP:LEAD to make it more accessible
- See WP:REFSPACE examples for where exactly to place the reference
- That's it for now I hope to have more comments later
- If you found my comments helpful, I suggest you help someone else do something sometime. =) Biosthmors (talk) 22:04, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
- From Scray
- Urge reworking of "Procedure" section to a text description rather than a "how to". -- Scray (talk) 14:35, 27 November 2012 (UTC)
- Subsequent edits did not reflect this suggestion, so I've introduced a few changes to give a sense of what I've suggested. Happy to discuss here. -- Scray (talk) 17:58, 27 November 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the help, The edits I made were based of of the way the procedure overview was written in this entry. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Surgery Jgore3 —Preceding undated comment added 18:07, 27 November 2012 (UTC)
- Subsequent edits did not reflect this suggestion, so I've introduced a few changes to give a sense of what I've suggested. Happy to discuss here. -- Scray (talk) 17:58, 27 November 2012 (UTC)