Talk:Equatorial Guinea at the 2016 Summer Olympics

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kees08 (talk · contribs) 08:40, 12 February 2017 (UTC)

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	Typo in athletes: The delegation included two track and field atheltes, Capitalize Summer Games: to a summer games is Change to participated: Equatorial Guinea would participate I believe play-off is one word: play-off match Capitalize Summer and Games appropriately throughout article. Remove 'and the oldest' from this sentence. You might want to include how old she was though, that is pretty high for an Olympic hurdler: Reïna-Flor Okori, the only Equatoguinean (and oldest) Use quotation marks appropriately in this sentence: In an interview before the games Okori said she wanted to compete for Equatorial Guinea having always wanted compete for the country where her ancestors are from and was looking to reach the final stage of her event and achieve victory.
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
	2c. it contains no original research.
	2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.	Do any sources say why? That is important: She was due to compete in the contest's sixth heat on 16 August alongside seven other participants but was unable to start the event.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
	7. Overall assessment.

• @Kees08: I believe I have dealt with all of the points raised above. I was unable to locate the information to state why Okori was unable to start her heat. MWright96 (talk) 16:38, 14 February 2017 (UTC)

@MWright96: I asked the writer of her article if he had a source for injury being the reason, as he put it there. I'll give it a couple days and see if we can get a source out of it, otherwise its a pass.

 Remind

Kees08. Dat GuyTalkContribs 18:35, 17 February 2017 (UTC)

@MWright96: Good news everyone! This article (you'll have to use a translator probably) reveals she was injured and the specific injury: http://la1ere.francetvinfo.fr/ces-ultra-marins-qui-ont-vecu-les-jo-de-l-interieur-389737.html

Kees08. Added into article. MWright96 (talk) 06:31, 18 February 2017 (UTC)

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