Talk:Eugene Kaspersky/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Carbrera in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 04:07, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
edit- Add information about his photo in the "alt" parameter please
- Remove the parameters not being used:
- "Image caption"
- "Other names"
- Keep the death date and place for now
- A better link for the "nationality" parameter would probably be the article for "Russians", yes?
Early life
edit- Nada, great work!
Kaspersky Lab
editOrigins
edit- Add a comma in between "In 1994" and "Hamburg University in Germany..." please
- Move Ref. 21 to after this sentence: "From 1998 to 2000, its annual revenue grew 280 percent and by 2000 almost sixty percent of revenues were international." instead of its current placement after "Kaspersky's company grew quickly in the late 1990s." please
CEO
edit- I think I would add "of the Kaspersky Lab" after "Kaspersky became CEO"; I don't know, it sounds more clear and exact this way
Controversies
editAlleged affiliations with Russia
edit- Remove the red link to "Sofacy" please
Personal life
editParagraph 3
edit- The last two statements sound more like afterthoughts and are awkwardly placed
- Are you suggesting a trim or moving it somewhere else? CorporateM (Talk) 23:51, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
- To be honest, I don't know what could be done with them. There's no better place for them but there, so it's fine. Carbrera (talk) 16:29, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
- Are you suggesting a trim or moving it somewhere else? CorporateM (Talk) 23:51, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
References
edit- Ref. 14 - De-capitalize "WIRED"
End of GA Review:
editA very good article, with just a few changes; in fact, probably the least amount of changes I've ever suggested. Good work! On hold for seven days; cheers, Carbrera (talk) 19:22, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
- Passing. Thanks for your quick responses! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 16:29, 10 June 2016 (UTC).