Talk:Eugene Kaspersky/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Carbrera in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 04:07, 2 June 2016 (UTC)Reply


Infobox

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  • Add information about his photo in the "alt" parameter please
  Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:54, 9 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • Remove the parameters not being used:
  • "Image caption"
  • "Other names"
  • Keep the death date and place for now
  Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:44, 9 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • A better link for the "nationality" parameter would probably be the article for "Russians", yes?
  Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:44, 9 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Early life

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  • Nada, great work!

Kaspersky Lab

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Origins

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  • Add a comma in between "In 1994" and "Hamburg University in Germany..." please
  Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:45, 9 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • Move Ref. 21 to after this sentence: "From 1998 to 2000, its annual revenue grew 280 percent and by 2000 almost sixty percent of revenues were international." instead of its current placement after "Kaspersky's company grew quickly in the late 1990s." please
  Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • I think I would add "of the Kaspersky Lab" after "Kaspersky became CEO"; I don't know, it sounds more clear and exact this way
  Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:48, 9 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Controversies

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Alleged affiliations with Russia

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  • Remove the red link to "Sofacy" please
  Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:49, 9 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Personal life

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Paragraph 3

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  • The last two statements sound more like afterthoughts and are awkwardly placed
Are you suggesting a trim or moving it somewhere else? CorporateM (Talk) 23:51, 9 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
To be honest, I don't know what could be done with them. There's no better place for them but there, so it's fine. Carbrera (talk) 16:29, 10 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

References

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  • Ref. 14 - De-capitalize "WIRED"
  Done CorporateM (Talk) 23:53, 9 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

End of GA Review:

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A very good article, with just a few changes; in fact, probably the least amount of changes I've ever suggested. Good work! On hold for seven days; cheers, Carbrera (talk) 19:22, 9 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Passing. Thanks for your quick responses! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 16:29, 10 June 2016 (UTC).Reply