Talk:Eureka Iron & Steel Works/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Doug Coldwell in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 20:29, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
Criteria
edit3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass
4. Neutral ✓ Pass
5. Stable ✓ Pass
6. Illustrations ✓ Pass
Comments
edit1.
- Expand the lead a bit
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:56, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
- "The new company had 20,000 shares valued at twenty-five dollars each" - Link shares to Stock
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:17, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
- "2-mile (3.2 km) of river frontage" - I think there's a way to produce a plural using the template, you'll have to look at the documentation for that. Having miles instead of mile will improve the grammar.
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:22, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
- "A blast furnace and a bar mill known as the Wyandotte Rolling Mill" - Link blast furnace, we don't seem to have an article for bar mill
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:17, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
- "that it consumed 50,000 cords of wood a year" - Link cords to Cord (unit)
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:17, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
- Probably best to link charcoal too, although I won't insist on this if you think it's an overlink.
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:17, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
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- Drop the quote from ref 1, it's not related to the statement ref 1 is citing.
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:25, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
- Check worldcat for OCLCs, Woodford 2001 is new enough it might have an ISBN, especially since it's published by a university.
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:08, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
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- Consider adding an infobox. It's not necessary, but it would help with the article.
- Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:56, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
Placing on hold. This one's in really good shape, I'm gonna go ahead and assess it as B class for now.
- @Hog Farm: - All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:57, 6 June 2020 (UTC)