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Latest comment: 3 months ago by TheNuggeteer in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Latest comment: 3 months ago29 comments2 people in discussion
Passed. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 23:02, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Nominator: Nascar9919 (talk ¡ contribs) 22:17, 16 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: TheNuggeteer (talk ¡ contribs) 11:22, 13 August 2024 (UTC)Reply


Reviewing the article! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 11:22, 13 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

The other half of the review:
  • You can add the seven judges (internal selection) in an AVOTROS source (I forgot which out of the two, meant to tell you yesterday).
  • You should add a note stating that Gover Meit is also Donny Ronny.
  • You also should mention that DJ Paul Elstak contributed to the song in source 41 (Linked revision)
Not done. Elstak is mentioned in the "Background and composition" section. Don't see a need to do it twice. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 18:06, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • You can also mention the "Douze points" from source 45 (Linked rev) if you want.
  • You need to mention that sources 48, 60, and 63 (linked rev) needs a subscription.
  • You need to mention that the 182 points that the song won was from televote.
  • You can add the interview mentioned in source 52 (linked rev)
  • Mention the zero-tolerance policy and a bit of a storyline of the incident in source 55 (linked rev)
  • Give more info on the song "Joost".
Thats it! Everything else is finished! Have a great day! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 06:28, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
@TheNuggeteer: Happy to hear! Just got done with my edits. Let me know if I need to fix up anything else. Have a great day :) Cheers, mate! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 18:07, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Here are my comments: Reference-related comments are from this revision.

  • Make gabber a quote, since the supposed genre was stated in a source.
  • I think Arjen Lubach should be specified as host of the show.
  • Add UTC time for CET.
  • I think that after "a personal friend of Klein", the comma should be a dot instead, and the next word will be capitalized.
  • I feel like you are missing a word in "Eurovision-related and other media"
  • You need to add more information on "Trouw".
  • The first iteration of ref 3 partly misses the sentence it was cited on.
  • Done. Let me know if you want it edited further.
  • Where did you get the "CET" from source 6? (First iteration)
  • Ref 11 (First iteration) does not mention the time, you can add source 6 to the sentence.
  • Ref 16 does not mention the date.
  • You could also add the ringtone and the sped-up version in promotion.
  • Cant find any mention of seven judges in ref 31, you can add ref 32.

Going to finish the other half tomorrow (Philippine time). Will put the article on hold. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:45, 13 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

@TheNuggeteer: Sounds good. Just got done with the edits you requested. See you in a bit! Cheers, mate! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 18:52, 13 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Nascar9919 Everything looks okay! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 23:00, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
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