Talk:Europium compounds/GA1
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Reviewer: Keresluna (talk · contribs) 15:58, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a. (reference section):
- b. (citations to reliable sources):
- c. (OR):
- d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a. (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a. (major aspects):
- b. (focused):
- a. (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/fail:
- Pass/fail:
(Criteria marked are unassessed)
I will take on reviewing the article. It looks fine at first glance, but I'll look at it more thoroughly. Keres🌕Luna edits! 16:00, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
First comments
editRandom ref check: reference 37 supports the statement that 'Europium triisopropylocene is a brown solid that can be reacted with hydrogen peroxide to give cyclopentadiene europium peroxide', could not find it in the article. Keres🌕Luna edits! 21:09, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
- I cannot access this source. 141Pr {contribs} 11:49, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
- If the source cannot be verified, it should be removed with the following statement, or another reference should be found. Keres🌕Luna edits! 16:53, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
- Couldn't find any refs for that, so I removed it. 141Pr {contribs} 20:54, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
- If the source cannot be verified, it should be removed with the following statement, or another reference should be found. Keres🌕Luna edits! 16:53, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
'Eu(fod)3 serves as a Lewis acid' what does fod stand for?
- Made more clear what the fod stood for. 141Pr {contribs} 11:47, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
- The aspect that Europium compounds fluoresce under UV is a pretty important topic, and I don't see anywhere explaining why or at least how in the article, only mentioned briefly in the captions. This probably fails Criterion 3a, as it fails to introduce a major aspect.
- I have addressed it in the lead, although I don't think it needs any further info. 141Pr {contribs} 12:35, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
Earwig found minor plagiarism on 'Europium(III) phosphide is a semiconductor used in high power, high-frequency applications and in laser diodes.', which the statement is copied off from ref 43. Also, American elements is not a reliable source according to WP:VENDOR.
- Removed sentence along with the source. 141Pr {contribs} 19:45, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
- The captions of the images are unreferenced, especially the statement that 'Europium compounds fluoresce under UV light at 395 nm and 365 nm.'
- Added a reference to the caption of the top video, couldn't find refs for the reaction one. 141Pr {contribs} 12:37, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
A sortable table like Terbium compounds would be nice.
- Added a table, although I don't see why it should be sortable. 141Pr {contribs} 12:26, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
The article is missing information on europium selenides, and should be added in the chalcogenides section.
- Added info about other europium chalcogenides apart from sulfides. 141Pr {contribs} 12:57, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
More info on various compounds is needed. For example, more info is needed on europium(III) hydroxide, and the halide section should be expanded. Keres🌕Luna edits! 01:46, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
- Done. 141Pr {contribs} 16:01, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
These comments would take a long time, I'll get started later. 141Pr {contribs} 08:30, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
- Ok, I will put it on hold until the comments are addressed. Keres🌕Luna edits! 14:15, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
@Keresluna: I have addressed all comments, it didn't actually take that long. 141Pr {contribs} 16:01, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
Is there any information about europium pnictogenides? If not, add information about them too. Keres🌕Luna edits! 16:37, 25 June 2023 (UTC)- I could only find information about the nitride and phosphide, but not the arsenide, antimonide and bismuthide. Is that OK? 141Pr {contribs} 17:58, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
- Yes, that is okay. Keres🌕Luna edits! 19:02, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
- Done. 141Pr {contribs} 16:42, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
- I have added information about europium arsenides if that's okay. Keres🌕Luna edits! 21:25, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
- Yes, that's fine 141Pr {contribs} 06:23, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
- I have added information about europium arsenides if that's okay. Keres🌕Luna edits! 21:25, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
- Done. 141Pr {contribs} 16:42, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
- Yes, that is okay. Keres🌕Luna edits! 19:02, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
- I could only find information about the nitride and phosphide, but not the arsenide, antimonide and bismuthide. Is that OK? 141Pr {contribs} 17:58, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
Prose
edit- In the section Other chalcogenides, add a hyphen between low and pressure. Keres🌕Luna edits! 01:08, 28 June 2023 (UTC)
- Done. 141Pr {contribs} 06:27, 28 June 2023 (UTC)
- In the Oxides section, replace temperature with temperatures.Keres🌕Luna edits! 00:58, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
- Done. 141Pr {contribs} 09:53, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
- In the Other chalcogenides section, add with the between triclinic crystal system and space group after the comma.
- Done. 141Pr {contribs} 09:00, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- In the Halides section, add be between Europium(II) iodide can also and obtained.
- Done. 141Pr {contribs} 09:00, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- In the Halides section, irridated is misspelled which should be replaced with irradiated.
- Done. 141Pr {contribs} 09:00, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- In the Pnictides section, europium im a stream, the word in misspelled.
- Done. 141Pr {contribs} 09:00, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- In the Pnictides section, europium(III) nitride, temd to form, tend is misspelled.
- Done. 141Pr {contribs} 09:00, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- In the Other Compounds section, add an between phase with water to and anhydrous monoclinic.
- Done. 141Pr {contribs} 09:00, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- In the Applications section, replace blocking electron of the with blocking electrons of the.
- Done. 141Pr {contribs} 09:00, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
I think that would be it for my prose and grammar comments. Keres🌕Luna edits! 00:08, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
References
editPage numbers needed: 3, 5, 6, 21, 28
Dead link: 4
I think that would be it for the references. Keres🌕Luna edits! 00:18, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- 3: Already done.
- 4: Fixed.
- 5: can't access.
- 6: can't access.
- Changed reference. Keres🌕Luna edits! 04:38, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
- 21: Fixed.
- 28: can't access.
- That's all I can do, hopefully someone else can help. 141Pr {contribs} 17:57, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- @Praseodymium-141: I have numbered the references, and will pass it. Keres🌕Luna edits! 04:40, 2 July 2023 (UTC)